Title: Loving you all the way~
Writer: purple_lilly
Requestor: a.
Lee Hana’s POV
I stared at the two boys that stole my heart. Yong Junhyung and my son Yong Doojoon. These two, without them, I’d be nothing. I gave birth to Doojoon almost two years ago. My marriage has been going well, and my son is growing well. But, I have a fear. Junhyung seems to be going out too much lately on business trips. He doesn’t get to see Doojoon often, and what if… he suddenly misses out on him growing up completely? That’s the worst fear that I’d ever conjured up in my mind. I hope it doesn’t happen either. Junhyung is obviously happy with us, and I’d like to keep it that way. The way when I wake up, I see him, the way that he’s always at the dinner table, the way that we both watch Doojoon sleep, the way I feel when I feel his arms wrap around me during the night. All those pleasant feelings are what keep me through the day happy and smiling.
I chuckled as I caught sight of Junhyung feigning pain from being tackled by Doojoon. My husband has always been overdramatic. I shook my head, as he pretended to eat Doojoon, to which he squealed for me to help. I ignored it; I knew after all, that if I did help, Doojoon wouldn’t be too pleased about it.
After setting the table, we all ate together as a family. I smiled at Doojoon being fed by Junhyung. This is the way things should be. Peaceful, calm and serene. No rushing, crying, pain, loneliness. Things I felt when Junhyung was away on a business trip last weekend. Though it was a weekend, I felt my heart shatter not knowing that Junhyung was going to be next to me when I woke up. Yes, I may be a weak woman. But I’m a weak woman in love. In love with the most amazing man I’d ever met, and I felt glad to have accepted his hand in marriage. I closed my eyes for a while, and let all the moments sink in. Junhyung here with us was pretty rare nowadays, and I had to try and remember every detail so that I never felt sad. Of course he constantly called to check up on us, but… sometimes it’s not the same as having him face to face with me.
“Hana, let’s go upstairs. Doojoon is sleepy.” Junhyung disturbed my train of thoughts, pointing at the sleepy eighteen month old, trying to keep his eyes open. “A.nee. Jun jun is awayke! I em alwightah!” Doojoon tried to keep himself up, but ended up falling head first on his high chair’s table.
“Omo!” I ran over to check if he was okay, but it was too late. Junhyung already took over and was taking him upstairs. I shook my head with a smile. ‘Junhyung, thanks. If it weren’t for you here… I don’t know what would happen.’ I thought.
But of course, things had to go wrong one way or another. After eating and putting Doojoon in his crib, Junhyung had received a phone call. I was busy in the kitchen cleaning up when I heard him:
“No! You can’t expect me to travel all the way to Canada on my wedding anniversary right? My wife and I are going to spend an amazing day together with our son! What? You’d promote me to senior head? I…-“ “Go on oppa. You need the promotion; you’ve always wanted it right? Don’t worry, we’ll celebrate another time.” “But… it’s OUR anniversary. I don’t want to miss that for the world.” “But, you don’t want to miss out on this amazing opportunity of the promotion now would you?” I asked him. He seemed to keep his gaze on me, then gave up. He put the phone to his ear and said, “alright. I’ll do it.”
I sighed. My third year anniversary, spent alone? Can I handle it perhaps? Sucking in my pride, I decided to be strong. Not all couples spent every anniversary together right? There are times when they have other important things to do… right? It sounds more like I’m trying to convince myself about this…
The whole night, I had been helping Junhyung pack for the three week trip.
“You won’t leave me for a Canadian girl would you?” I cautiously asked. “Hell no. Nothing can beat my baby, any day. You’re better than any woman out there in the world!” He exaggerated. I giggled, “oppa, I’m going to miss you. Don’t forget about me and Doojoon arraso?” He chuckled, lightening the serious mood, “I won’t. Gosh, you’re making it sound like I’ll be gone for a year! I’ll be back as soon as you know it, and then we can celebrate as a family and maybe… get ready for a second child?” He suggested, pulling me closer to him. I pushed him off with little effort, and shook my head, “it was worth a try right?” he joked, kissing my cheek.
These moments. I’m going to miss them. I helped him zip up the bag, and watched as he walked into our bedroom toilet. He’ll be leaving tomorrow afternoon. So sudden as well and sadly it had to take place on the week of our anniversary. I’m sure going to miss him. He’s been the one there for me when I cried through my pain. Of course, there’s always Kikwang oppa, but… he’s just a brother. He’s meant to care. Junhyung oppa chose to care, and ended up being my husband.
I crawled into bed, and pulled the duvet up to my shoulders. After a while, I heard the shower turn off. Junhyung came out in a towel, and got dressed. Even if we have been married for three years, I can’t stop myself from blushing every time he changed in front of me. Just a habit I guess. However, instead of coming next to me, Junhyung went out of the room. Confused, I started wondering what he was going to do. But then he came back, so I pretended to be asleep.
“Hana, please open your eyes. I’ve got something for you~” He sang. I opened them. He knows me too well. “Here, it’s early, I know, but since I can’t spend our third year anni with you, I’ll give it to you now.” On his outstretched left hand was a box. Curiously, I opened it to find the most amazing thing ever. It was a white gold bracelet, which had charms. Many of them had certain significant meanings to the both of us. A heart because we met at Valentine’s Day, a flower because he always gave me flowers whenever we would meet, a peace sign because my brother and him didn’t usually get along until I stepped into the picture, a rattle representing Doojoon and H♥J for me and Junhyung. I smiled gratefully at him. “Oppa, thanks so much for the gift. I’m sorry I didn’t get you one, I was planning to get you one on Thursday, but… your business trip was short notice. I’m sorry, this gift is amazing! If only I could… You’re not really paying attention are you?” I asked. “Not really. In fact, I was just staring at how lovely you looked in the moonlight.” “Err, the curtains are closed. The lights are off, how can there be moonlight?” “Oh yeah… I guess I just got lost in your eyes… Okay, I’m sorry for the cheesiness. I’m just sad that I won’t be able to spend the night with you tomorrow night. I’m going to miss my baby soo much!” He grabbed me, and pulled me into a tight hug, making me giggle. “Oppa, you’ll come back and when you do, I’ll make sure that you’ll have the greatest time ever! You’ll be promoted, and Doojoon and you can carry on with what you left of with! Kikwang oppa can also come over and you two could do what you usually do.” I spoke my thoughts, planning out what could happen, that is if he did come back in the first place. When I realized he wasn’t replying, I turned, and looked at him questioningly. “Oppa, what’s wrong?” I asked. “I’m really sorry. I know our anniversary means the world to you. And… I can’t even spend the day with you. In fact, I’ll be gone for three weeks. The longest I’ve been gone has been six days. Three weeks without you? I don’t think I’d be able to survive.” “Oppa, who was the one that told me that there’s always hope?” “Me.” “And who told me that they love me so much, that they’re willing to do anything?” “Me.” “Exactly. So, think of this business trip as something for me. You can spend all the time in the world you want with me when you come back. Listen, it’s getting late now. We should really sleep now, if you want to wake up early tomorrow.” I told him. “Arraso.” He picked me up and laid me down on the bed, and lay next to me.
I stared to the ceiling and listened to our breathing, in harmony, together. I turned my head to Junhyung after a while, and found him sleeping. Looking down on my waist, I saw his arm around it. Smiling, I tried savouring the moment. Three weeks of no night-time hugging. Three weeks of no passionate kisses. Three weeks of not hearing Doojoon’s laughter because of his dad. Three weeks of not seeing Junhyung… I’ll be strong through it. All couples have to spend time apart from each other at some point in time. Plus, this will benefit, because Junhyung will be promoted!
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Junhyung was set to leave in two hours. We were in the airport, and waiting until it became an hour, before Junhyung would go through the gates. He didn’t want to leave me just yet. I smiled at him, and he smiled back. Junhyung held out his arms, and I willingly put Doojoon into them. He kissed Doojoon’s nose and watched as his son giggled with glee. Junhyung turned to me, and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I blushed, and put my hand against my cheek. Junhyung, I’m going to miss you.
After an hour, Junhyung reluctantly left us. Doojoon was trying his best not to cry, but ended up doing so. I bit my lip, trying my hardest not to let the tears come out. ‘Junhyung’s going to be back. You don’t need to cry! Be strong for your family! Fighting!’ I thought to myself. Taking one last glance at the gates, I left the airport and headed to my car.
There, I put Doojoon in his car seat, then went to the front and let all the tears come out. ‘There’s no kidding that I’ll be alright. I miss his so much already! I feel like such a weakling! I should be used to this thanks to his constant travelling, yet everytime… I cry. I bawl. I wish he was here next to me. Babo-yah! If you wanted him to stay, he didn’t have to go!... But he needs that promotion…’ I wiped my tears, and started the engine. I put the Bluetooth wireless earphone on and called Kikwang oppa.
‘Yeobeseyo?’ His voice asked
“Oppa, is it alright that I come over? Junhyung left for Canada, and it’ll feel lonely without him at home. I feel like having family company.” I requested.
‘Sure! Anything to see my nephew. How long will you be here for?’
“Three weeks probably.”
Kikwang whistled, ‘wow, that’s the longest he’s ever left you. You okay sis?’
“Yeah. I’ll be there, after packing our stuff arraso oppa?”
‘Yep. Just call when you arrive, so that I can open the gates. Bye Hanhan!’
“You know I’ve always hated that nickname!” I mumbled playfully.
‘Eh.’
“Bye bye oppa! See you!” I changed the subject, and hung up.
Three weeks with oppa. That should probably fix my problem, and fulfil the empty needing within me right? It should, since he is after all my family.
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I got home and started to pack. Doojoon’s clothes, and then my own. Within three hours, I checked that the house was in perfect condition, so that when we got home, I didn’t need to clean anything. After checking everything was alright, and that the doors were locked, I carried Doojoon in his car seat into my car. After that I dragged the two suitcases towards my car and closed the boot. I ran to the driver’s seat, and started the car. Reversing out, we made our way to Kikwang’s house.
I called him when I was parked directly outside of his gate, “oppa, we’re here now.” ‘Arraso, I’ll open the gates now.’ As he was speaking, the gates automatically opened. “Oowah! Umma, is it magic?” Doojoon asked. “Neh honey it is. Kikwang oppa has magic powers you know!” “Omo! Hyung? We’re staying at hyung’s hose?” “It’s house honey, H.O.U.S.E.” “Howse.” Doojoon tried. I giggled, then drove in.
When I safely parked next to his car, Kikwang opened the main door, and opened his arms. I took Doojoon out from his car seat and ran into his arms, where he gave me the tightest hug ever. A big brother, one that cared for me. I’m lucky to have one. Doojoon moved about because of the tight hug. Kikwang loosened his hold from both of us.
“Whose this big boy huh?” Kikwang picked him up and swirled him around. I smiled, glad that Kikwang was there for me. I somehow felt that something was missing. Sure, Kikwang made me feel happy since I didn’t feel alone, but… I feel as it… Junhyung needed to be here with us… “I’m Yong Doojoon!” Doojoon smiled, and pinched his uncle’s cheeks. I giggled, “oppa can we go in now? It’s getting pretty cold out here.” I suggested.
Kikwang agreed and lead us into his home. A home that never failed to amaze me, with its new modern styles, modern furniture, Jacuzzi… and so much more! My big brother sure is a good businessman. The reason he and Junhyung weren’t in good terms with each other, was that both of them had business deals to fight over, and Kikwang won, [go us Lees!]. But, Junhyung started dating me, and later found out I was Kikwang’s sister. He loved me enough to put away his anger, and accept that Kikwang wasn’t a ruthless bastard. Which warmed my heart of course. He could’ve chosen to ignore Kikwang all his life, but because of me, the two are like inseparable brothers. The good things I do for people huh?
Kikwang put Doojoon down on the floor, and instantly, he ran around happily. I smiled, seeing him play with his favourite toy here at oppa’s house; the truck that when you pressed your foot on the button, it would move. He always squealed in delight every time he played in it.
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After putting Doojoon to sleep in the guest room, where I’ll be joining him later on, I had a chat with oppa.
“So, Junhyung hyung left again? I don’t understand how you can stand him always leaving. Aren’t you afraid that he’d leave you for someone else? That he could get into an accident, and never be able to come back home?” oppa asked me. “Actually, I am. But before he left, he told me that I’m the one for him.” I said. Though, about Junhyung getting into an accident? That thought hadn’t occurred to me. “Hyung is strong, I know. But sis, I feel sorry for you. You’re constantly being left alone. Doojoon needs to have a father figure next to him. That he can appreciate. That won’t constantly be on the move. What I’m trying to say is, convince Junhyung that he doesn’t have to move around a lot to make ends meet. Look at me, I don’t travel a lot, yet I have this fabulous home!” “Yeah, but he likes travelling. I don’t want his passion to go away because of it. Besides, when he travels, he is able to buy me these amazing presents! I might sound shallow because of it, but when he gives me the presents, I feel as if he kept thinking about me. Because he was conscious of what I thought about the present. Wondering whether I liked it or not.” “Ahh, but he could’ve just been giving you the present to cover up for the lost time he had with you. Listen Hana, you’re my sister. I hate seeing you hurt. Seeing you cry because of hyung makes me regret ever becoming good friends with him. Because anyone that hurts my little sis, will never see the light of day again. But, since I know that you love him, I stop myself. Just please, try and not be a wimp. Stand up for your love. It’s your third year anniversary next week for crying out loud, and the man cares more about business. I’m not sure Hana, but… I don’t think he’s the one for you anymore.” “Of course he is! Oppa, I love him so much! He’s perfect for me. I’m just sad how he leaves a lot. But, to be honest, it’s because he wants the best for me and Doojoon. I understand his situation. Listen, I’m really thankful for you to have offered me company while Junhyung’s away, but please don’t be mean to him. I love the man, and if you’re badmouthing him, you might as well do the same to me. Goodnight oppa.” I stood up and left him.
‘Kikwang oppa didn’t mean what he said. He’s just tired. Both of us will sleep through this, and forget about it. We’ll start anew tomorrow, and be happy. I don’t want him to think of Junhyung badly again, so I shouldn’t cry. I need to make Kikwang see the goodness within him, so that they’re not just being ‘brotherly’ because of me, but because they want to.’ I crept into the guest room, to see Doojoon curled on his side. Smiling, I silently tip-toed and sat on the edge. I then lay myself down, and hugged him close to me. ‘My baby, you’re so much alike to me and your father. You cry easily, yet you’re strong willed like your father. Do umma a favour and don’t grow up too fast. I don’t want your dad to miss out on anything,’ and with that thought, I fell asleep.
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Junhyung’s POV
I arrived at Canada after a sixteen hour long flight. In Korea, it’d probably be night time already, so I don’t really think I should call, in case they wake up. I’ve got such bad jetlag! I feel so tired, that I can’t be bothered to wait for my luggage, but I have to. I blinked multiple times to keep my eyes open. Humf. First class? Yeah right, more like ‘let’s all party and not let this one passenger that we don’t know sleep’ sounds better. There was a group of colleagues that seemed to have been celebrating, that were in the same class as me. I couldn’t sleep because they kept talking and rambling about their businesses.
I eventually got my luggage, and made my way out. I dragged my suitcase to customs, and finally I got through. Thankfully within a five minute walk, past lots of Duty Free stores, I caught sight of a Starbucks. I smelled the smell of fresh coffee and cakes. I went up to the counter, and asked, ‘do you have a large coke?’ Thankfully they did, and gave me some.
Sipping on the straw, I exited the Canadian airport, and looked for the hotel that I was staying at.
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Hana's POV
I sighed. First morning without Junhyung. I’ve coped well, I’m actually cooking breakfast, while Kikwang is upstairs, snoring away. Doojoon was in his high chair strapped in safely. Occasionally, I would glance at him to check on him. He was playing with his food, which I didn’t really mind. I could always clean him up later. I took the pan off from the stove, and turned the gas off. An omelette for breakfast, with orange juice.
Placing the omelette on a plate, and the juice into a cup, I lifted both items in my hand, and walked over to the table, where another omelette was. One was for me, the other for oppa. I pouted, and turned to the side. With only me and Doojoon down here, we might as well be at home to be honest. Rolling my eyes, I walked up to Doojoon.
“Umma’s going to be gone for a while arraso? Don’t do anything that will make umma angry neh?” I asked. He nodded in return, so I made my way up.
I searched from door to door, trying to find Kikwang’s room. Knowing my brother, he’d like the room with the most light in. So, in the end, I chose the last room to the left. However, instead of going in without knocking, I heard him speaking to someone on the phone. Maybe that’s why he hasn’t come down yet. I was about to leave, that is until I heard my husband’s name mentioned. So, with pure curiosity, I pushed my ear against the door.
‘Junhyung hyung, why don’t you see that you’re hurting my sister? She’s sad since you left you know. Yes, yes, I know, it’s for the well-being of your family. But how so, if you’re constantly leaving them? ... Yes, I understand, yet look at me. I stay at home and I’m perfectly fine! I’m not giving stress out to people I love! Eugh! Yes! I know I’m not married so that I shouldn’t need to leave constantly… but please. Aish, you really don’t get it do you? MY SISTER IS HURTING BECAUSE OF YOU! SHE’S CRYING BECAUSE YOU’RE NOT BY HER SIDE, SHE’S LONELY BECAUSE SHE CAN’T SPEND TIME WITH HER HUSBAND, AND SHE’S SCARED THAT YOU’LL MISS OUT ON SEEING DOOJOON GROW! What kind of a sick bastard does that huh? Look, I’m not trying to make you sad or anything. I just want the best for my little sis. And… oh, what’s that? You’re apologizing? To me? Dude, apologize to your WIFE.’ He hung up.
My breath was caught in my throat, when I heard the following, “come in.”
I entered oppa’s room. He knew I had been listening all along!
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Junhyung’s POV
Damn. She’s really suffering because of me? I face palmed myself. She is right though… I’m missing out on the days when we always had dates every evening. What have I become? I’m leaving my family for what? Money? If I suddenly came home one day, and saw no family, money won’t cause me any happiness. No, my family would.
Promotion or no promotion, I’ve got to fix this mess immediately! I called my boss, and told him that I was going to leave. He protested at first, but when I told him my situation, he agreed that I needed to rest. His family was important to him, and he knew how I felt since he had been the same not too long ago. I thanked him, and started to pack up my clothes. I just hope that there’s still an available flight for me to get on, ready to be back in Korea for tomorrow!
Before leaving though, I went to the shopping mall in the Hotel I was staying at. There were fine selections of rings, bracelets, broaches, tiaras, necklaces and earrings. Something caught my eye though. Glistening ruby necklaces that instantly said ‘I’m sorry’ in my eyes. A perfect ‘forgive me’ present for the perfect wife! I instantly bought it, and apologized to the couple about to buy it
The woman behind the glass panes gave me the box; I smiled and rushed to my hotel room, where I could pack it with my luggage as well. I called my secretary to arrange me tickets. Only, there was a slight downside to it…
“Yeoseul set up some tickets for me. I need to leave for a flight to Korea arriving tomorrow.” “Sir, that’s impossible. Conditions are stormy on the flight’s path. You’ll have to wait for it to clear up before you can fly out of the country.” “WHAT?! When will the storm pass then?” “In three weeks’ time.” “Woman, I said I need the flight now! I can’t wait three weeks!” “Sir, no need to be rude! I’m sorry, but what can I do? You have a family to get back to, and I don’t want to be the blame of you coming back here in Seoul burnt because of lighting!” “You’re right. Mianhe! But you see, my family is the reason why I’m going. I don’t want to have to spend any less time with them than I have already done. I would fly from state to state, continent to continent, just to get to them on time!” “You could do that, but… it might be more expensive.” “Aigoo! I don’t care! Just as long as I can get there A.S.A.P!” “Oh sir! Good news! The sky will be clear on one day, on Saturday. You think you can wait for two days?” “Ahh, it’s the best shot I’ve got right? Sure, I’ll wait for two days.” “Thanks sir. I’m looking forward to seeing you soon!” “And… one more thing, don’t tell my family. I want to surprise them about this!” “Neh sir! Bye!” She hung up.
‘Yong family, wait for me. I’m coming home!!’ I smiled to myself, and stared out my hotel window, seeing dark clouds forming. ‘That is if I get to go on the plane’ I thought, frowning.
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Hana’s POV
“So, breakfast oppa?” I innocently asked him. “Don’t play coy with me!” He stared at me, “I know you’ve been listening to what I said to your husband. I’m sorry okay? He needed to know.” I looked down, my hands falling limp, “no he didn’t. Now, he’s going to feel sad that he left us. I don’t want him unhappy. It’s alright for me to be unhappy, but for him? I don’t think I can take it…” “Yes, but what about how I feel huh? Did you ever consider that into your mind? Or, were you too busy thinking about your Junhyung that you didn’t care about your own oppa seeing you sad? Hana, it hurts okay? It hurts me seeing my only little sister sad.” Kikwang said. “Oppa, I’m not sad. Okay… maybe a little bit. But, I can handle it. I always have, and always will. I’m a strong girl, you know that obviously. Oppa, please, now you told him, he’ll worry. I don’t want him distracted from work! Now, he won’t be able to focus!” “Well, I can’t focus on I ANYTHING seeing you sad okay? Please, if he loves you truly, then he’ll come home. If he doesn’t care, and cares more for his business, well, that’s your deal then. I won’t do anything, but comfort you from the pain.” Kikwang promised. “Aish oppa. Let’s just go downstairs now and eat breakfast. Doojoon must be wondering where we are.” I mumbled, trudging down the steps, hoping to hear steps behind me. Which I eventually heard after five minutes.
The breakfast meal was silent. I kept staring out the window, at the rainy day. I bit my lip. The weather is so bad. Can oppa even come home? The weather seems to be really bad… Kikwang turned on the TV, breaking my track of thoughts, and I whipped my head when I heard the news report.
‘It is reported that severe rain will occur between the American and Asian continents. A heavy storm will break out, and will last two days. Flights between the two continents will be cancelled for the safety of the people. Flights will be delayed, and people will have to either stay in the hotels or at the airports. So far, no one is harmed with the weather. We’ll keep you updated.’
Kikwang changed the channel. I just stood there frozen. ‘Oppa, you can’t be on your way back now right? Surely you’re not stupid enough to risk your life. Hehehe, how silly am I to even be thinking this? Of course he won’t be coming home. He understands the weather conditions. I just hope oppa isn’t hurt or anything…’ I thought. I chewed on the omelette in a monotone mood. Doojoon was upstairs playing with Kikwang in the TV room next to the bathroom. From upstairs, I could hear Toy Story being played and squeals of happiness. My mouth twitched a bit, trying to smile, but only the slightest bit…
The rain hadn’t cleared one bit. It was still pouring, if not, even more heavily than before. Pulling myself off the chair, I took a walk around the house. Going out would be bad, I might get sick because of the rain. I looked up, at the chandelier gleaming a pale yellow. If there was an earthquake, it would fall on me right now. But, because of that thought, I took three careful steps away from being directly under the light. I sighed, ‘I guess I’ll just have to wait for oppa to come back in three weeks’ time…’ I pouted, and went to my room.
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Two days have passed. The rain cleared away, like the newscast had said it would. I looked out the window, and stared at the clear sky. I remembered what Kikwang said ‘if he loved you, he’d come back’. I closed my eyes, ‘oppa prove Kikwang wrong. Come back to me. Tell him that you love me and will be there for us.’ I opened my eyes, to see my reflection on the window. No change. I was still at Kikwang’s house. Sighing, I walked to the living room and watched SpongeBob with Doojoon.
All of a sudden, there was a buzz around the house.
“Relax, it’s just the gate buzzer. Someone came to visit! I wonder who it is… omo… You’ll never believe this sis.” Kikwang pulled me over to him, and then told me to look through the peep hole. “Junhyung oppa…” I murmured. I pushed Kikwang away from me, and opened the front door, and ran to open the gate. There, I met the warmest arms wrapping around my waist. “Junhyung oppa…” I breathed into his neck. I could feel vibrations from his laughter. “Dang, your brother was right. You did miss me a lot.” Heck yes, you don’t know how much! I gave him a loving kiss, and pulled back. I pinched his cheek. He winced and asked, “what was that for?” I replied, “to check if you were really here. Oppa, you don’t know how much I’ve missed you.” His eyes softened, and he leaned in to kiss me again.
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I was in the kitchen, gazing into Junhyung’s eyes, and holding his hand. He was speaking to Kikwang explaining why he suddenly arrived.
“I missed my family so much. I only got a wakeup call to reality when you called me two days ago. I asked from my boss if I could go home. I explained my situation, and he agreed immediately. I don’t care about my promotion anymore. If it means not going to go home to a family then I quit.” Junhyung stated. “Great! You can work for me! It’d be awesome, we’ll be unbeatable!” Kikwang planned, his eyes gleaming. “Now oppa, you make it sound like you two are gang leaders and that you just became allies!” I joked, only to get serious faces back, “what, are you gang leaders?” Junhyung coughed loudly, “no honey. We just wanted to trick you.” I nodded, still suspicious.
The whole afternoon, Junhyung forgot that he just arrived from a plane and played with Doojoon with a smile that caused me to smile. If I could see colors for people’s auras, Junhyung’s would be yellow because of happiness, and mine blue because of the calmness I felt. I giggled at Junhyung pretending to die. Doojoon had a sad face, and was kicking his dad’s ribcage. Junhyung was non-moving. I started to get worried, but then he ‘came back to life’ and roared at Doojoon. I smiled again, a nice scene. Seeing my only son getting chased my his dad. Sure, scary to look at, but… to be honest, it meant that Junhyung was here. And him being here just completed my day.
Kikwang tapped my shoulder, and I turned around. He pulled me to my room and whispered into my ear ‘wear something that your husband would love’ before pushing me in. Confused, I went to the closet with a daze.
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Junhyung’s POV
“HYUNG! I got your wife in the room ready to change. Why don’t you go into my room and change? I’ll look after your little rascal arraso?” I turned to look at Kikwang with a smile, and thanked him, before running to his room. On his bed was a suit that had a casual yet ‘sophisticated’ look about it. I smiled, and put it on.
After twenty minutes, I was out, and waiting in the living room. Half an hour later, I heard the sound of heels clicking against the marble stair floor. Turning my head, I almost had a heart attack. Hana was in a stunning ocean blue dress that cascaded down to the floor. It had ruffles on the waist area, in a lighter shade than the rest of the dress. Her hair was up, and there were little curls loose. I had been keeping my breath in for some reason.
Finally next to me, she curled her hair behind her ear, and asked, “how do I look?” I replied with a smile, “breath-taking.” Which was true, she took my breath away. Only she can have that effect on me.
We went off to dinner at a restaurant near the ocean. It was evening, and the sun was about to set. A violin was playing in the background, and couples were dancing around. The restaurant had a European theme to it. It smelled of Lavender and wine. Colors of different shades were around us and the tables had elegant dressings. We ordered for Greek Salad, with Wine. I kept staring at my wife’s face. She looked so innocent! She kept looking around, curious about the different sights and smells. I smiled, she looked like a young child that didn’t know where she was.
The orders came, and we ate the food in an awkward silence.
“Hana, we look like an awkward couple that just went on their first date!” I joked. “Oh, sorry. It’s just… unusual. We haven’t gone on dates like this in a while. I’m just slightly feeling like this isn’t real.” I started to feel bad. She wasn’t used to having dates with me because I never took her to places anymore. “Look, I’m sorry about that. I feel really bad about it, and I wish to make it up to you. Hana, from this moment forth, I will not and cannot leave you anymore. I will look for a job that wouldn’t make me leave home as much. That wouldn’t make me miss out on some moments in my family life. Hana, you mean the world to me, and if I am to ever los you, I’ll never forgive myself.” I looked down. Hana’s hand landed on my cheek, and I looked up expectantly. “That… that means a lot to me oppa. Thank you,” she murmured. I grinned, and continued to eat my dinner.
After the dinner, I spent the rest of the night walking with her in the streets of a busy Seoul. We walking hand in hand, swinging them occasionally. Her happy laugh never failed to make me smile. I was making her happy. The way it should be.
“Oppa, you didn’t have to go to this extent. We could just be at home, being cozy together. I mean, Kikwang oppa must be bother now. He might’ve been really busy. And, I interrupted him!” She face palmed herself. I grabbed her hand, preventing her to hurt herself. “Sst! I’m sure your brother doesn’t mind. He cares for you, and is willing –like I am – to do anything for you arraso?” “Okay. I get it. It’s just… I bothered him, and here I am bothering him again, by having to look after Doojoon.” “Aigoo. Baby, why don’t you realize that I wanted to do this for you huh? I missed being with you, and when I asked Kikwang to do this favour for me, he smiled, and told me that I was finally back to being the Junhyung that he admired. Hana, your brother didn’t disagree with this. In fact, he made the reservations himself!” I explained, she smiled slightly. I put my arms around her, and pulled her close. “SARANGHAE my love.” I murmured. “Nado saranghae.” She replied, kissing my cheek.
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I spent the whole week with my family. I didn’t go out the house once. We went back home the day after my dinner with Hana. It was great. I finally realized that my family missed me and that I didn’t have to work almost every day! On Monday, I took them to the zoo. Doojoon saw his first monkey! It was hilarious when he tried to imitate them. On Tuesday we went to the arcade, and I won Doojoon many toys and presents. On Wednesday, I had a romantic dinner with my wife, presenting her the ruby earrings, because it was our anniversary. Her eyes were glistening with tears, and she had kissed me non-stop the whole evening. (I was really happy that night).
Now, its Thursday and we were planning to have a picnic on the beach, if Hana hadn’t collapsed. Worried, I picked her up, and took her to my car. Doojoon was strapped in, then we set off for the hospital. When we arrived there, I rushed to the doctor. He quickly took her into the room and ran tests to see what was going on. He came out grinning widely.
“Aigoo. Such a sill excuse to come to the hospital.” He murmured. “What do you mean by that?” I asked. “Well, from the tests, your wife is pregnant. Two days to be honest. Which is strange, because she collapsed. Was she overworking perhaps? This could’ve happened because of over-exhaustion.” I froze… pregnant? OMO! MY WIFE WAS PREGANT. I lifted Doojoon and spun him around, “you’re going to be a big brother now!” I shouted, really happy.
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I'm so so so so so sorry about the long delay! *bows*
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Wednesday, 23 February 2011
Wednesday, 26 January 2011
My cheesy boy..
Requested by: pa_houa94
Written by: purple_lilly
Title: My Cheesy boy
Characters: Lee Sungmin, Jung Jessica.
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Lee Sungmin was walking down leisurely down the hallway. Students stared as he walked by. Sungmin was carrying a pink folder. Which wasn't unusual, the thing was, it wasn't his. In fact, he found it on his desk before break, and was handing it in to reception for lost and found. He was the sort of boy to do the responsible thing.
When Sungmin had arrived at the fron desk, he saw that no one was there. He sighed, looked around that at the pink folder again. It didn't have any pictures on it, but there was writing all over it. Not graffiti style, but longhand and joined. Almost as if it had been handled with great care when writing. He heard a gasp to his left, and found a pretty, brown-oranged hair girl walk over to him with a big smile. Her perfect pearly teeth, glinting in the light.
"OMO! Thanks soo much! That folder belongs to me." She explained, trying to get the folder from Sungmin.
"Oh, well, I'm not sure if it really is yours. Could you tell me your name first?"
"Ahh! Where are my manners? My name is Jung Jessica. I came here last week. I'm still not used to having to carry my books around. At my previous school, there were lockers. How about you, whats your name?"
"I'm Lee Sungmin. So, Jung Jessica-shii, what brings you to this side of the town?" Sungmin's school wasn't exactly run down, nor was it extravagently elegant. It had more of a 'boarding school' look to it, rather than a high school.
"Oh, well, I had a little financial crisis here and there, and my parents decided it was best for me to move schools. Schools at Southern Seoul are a bit pricey neh?" Jessica joked.
"Yep... I guess?" Sungmin didn't really know, as he had never been to the Southern part. Always the Eastern. Always. "Have you got any friends?" Sungmin asked, curious. If she had not friends, he would've gladly offered to be hers, but... that might've shown a bit of desperation.
"Yep. In fact, eight of them are waiting in the canteen."
'Eight? She doesn't mean SNSD right? I mean, sure she's cute, and she's beautiful... oh what the hey! This girl belongs to be in that group!' Sungmin thought.
"Ahh, well I guess I'll see you 'round Jessica-shii." Sungmin siad, giving the pink folder to her.
"Yep, I guess so." She said, accepting the folder.
---
It had been three days since the incident. Sungmin was in his room. He lived in an apartment with one roomate. Cho Kyuhyun. The two seemed like real brothers, never separating, but... thats not what Sungmin thought. In fact, Kyuhyun was out, with one of the SNSD members Sungmin supposed. Kyuhyun had always been trying to take one of them out, but always got turned down. I guess Kyuhyun got lucky with one.
On the floor where Sungmin lived, there were six different homes. Each had two people residing in them, except for one, which had three. The whole floor was of great friends, who called themselves Super Junior. They were very close, but everyone roomed with who they were the closest to. They always went to school together, always shared laughs together, and always stuck together. Super Junior was the Kingkas at the school. Which is why when Sungmin had passed, many people had stared at him.
Being lonely wasn't something Sungmin could deal with. He decided to head out and take a walk around the park near his apartment. After fixing his hair, making sure he looked presentable, adding some cologne he walked out of the door, making sure to lock the door.
He walked out of the building, hands in his pockets, and whistling a tune. The birds seemed to know the tune, and tweeted along with him, making him grin. He walked across the road, making sure it was clear first, and arrived at the park. Since it was Saturday, the park was pretty busy. There were families having picnics, people jogging around, walking their dogs, taking their children out to play in the playground, lovers staring into each other's eyes, Kyuhyun holding Jessica's hand... Sungmin froze in his place. Kyuhyun was on a date with Jessica?! He couldn't believe it. For one thing, he felt like a tower had dropped onto him. Why should've he had felt like that? He barely knew the girl, why would he had liked her already? Maybe it was just a crush, something that wasn't meant to be...
He was about to turn around, when Kyuhyun had spotted him. Khyuhyun waved him over, and introduced the two to each other.
"Jessica, this is Sungmin hyung. He's the roomie I was talking about earlier." Kyuhyun explained.
"Yeah, I met him three days ago." Jessica whispered, trying to keep her gaze on Kyuhyun, obviously failing, since she kept glancing at Sungmin. 'Why does he look sad?' She wondered.
"Oh, well, since you've already met, then I guess there's nothing else to talk about. Hehehe... so, erm... hyung, I'll be home a bit late tonight. I've got somewhere to go with Jessica first." Kyuhyun said, wrapping an arm around her shoulders.
At the sight of that, Sungmin felt his chest tightening. "Arraso. Don't stay out to late, and Jessica, if he ever does something that makes your feel uncomfortable, just tell him. He would understand, won't cha Kyu?"
"Yep." Kyuhyun nodded, smiling at Sungmin.
Sungmin smirked then walked away.
'Huh, so much for the nice walk out. I met someone I liked, only to find my best friend already dating her. I can't risk my friendship just for one girl. I mean, Kyuhyun seems pretty serious about Jessica as well! Something about him that I had never seen in him before! I guess I should just let it go.' Sungmin thought, walking back to his apartment.
---
It had been three months. The Kyuhyun and Jessica thing had died over time. They didn't find anything in common. AT ALL. So, in the end, Jessica was still looking for her 'man' but... just wasn't looking at the right place. She was in her history class, when she felt something land on her shoulder. She turned and found a peice of paper on it. The person behind her pointed to the door. A figure's shadow moved quickly and left. She quickly grabbed it, before the teacher would notice, and read the note.
The note read. Jessica's heart melted. the final line, she could tell the writer had run out of things to rhyme. She smiled at its cheesiness, and pressed it to her chest. Whoever sent it, must've had something important to say. And, she guessed that since it was a poem, that maybe the person who gave it must've been confessing their love to her. She giggled at the thought, but instantly went back to school mode, when she saw the teacher glance her way. Secretly, Jessica tucked the note into her pocket.
---
Jessica was looking around. She had arrived at the park, as fast as she could. However, she was the only one there. Maybe she was a bit too early for the admirer to arrive? What if he thought she was too eager since she had shown up to early? Realizing this, Jessica flicked her forehead, wincing at the pain.
"Hey, don't do that." A soft voice said.
She opened her eyes. "... Sungmin-shii?" she whispered, making sure she wasn't hallucinating.
"Neh, so... what brings you to this park?" He casually asked.
"Oh, someone wrote me a note. It said to come here after school. I guess I was a bit too early for them. Or... or maybe I was too late and they left!!!" Jessica started to worry. What if she lost her potential 'the one' because of being late?!
"Erm.. I don't think you were too early, nor were you too late. In fact, you arrived at the same time as I." Sungmin stated, a glint shining in his eye.
"So... YOU sent me the note?" Jessica asked him. The corner of his mouth twitched up. Jessica gasped, them smiled. "It was a nice rhyme." she commented on the poem, taking out the paper.
"Hehehe... it was a bit cheesy though." He said, finally admitting it was him, and sat down next to her.
"Yeah... well then, you're MY cheesy boy." Jessica said, wrapping her arms around his.
He blushed his favorite color - pink.
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I hope you enjoyed! I'm sorry if its not to your liking though ^^.
Written by: purple_lilly
Title: My Cheesy boy
Characters: Lee Sungmin, Jung Jessica.
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Lee Sungmin was walking down leisurely down the hallway. Students stared as he walked by. Sungmin was carrying a pink folder. Which wasn't unusual, the thing was, it wasn't his. In fact, he found it on his desk before break, and was handing it in to reception for lost and found. He was the sort of boy to do the responsible thing.
When Sungmin had arrived at the fron desk, he saw that no one was there. He sighed, looked around that at the pink folder again. It didn't have any pictures on it, but there was writing all over it. Not graffiti style, but longhand and joined. Almost as if it had been handled with great care when writing. He heard a gasp to his left, and found a pretty, brown-oranged hair girl walk over to him with a big smile. Her perfect pearly teeth, glinting in the light.
"OMO! Thanks soo much! That folder belongs to me." She explained, trying to get the folder from Sungmin.
"Oh, well, I'm not sure if it really is yours. Could you tell me your name first?"
"Ahh! Where are my manners? My name is Jung Jessica. I came here last week. I'm still not used to having to carry my books around. At my previous school, there were lockers. How about you, whats your name?"
"I'm Lee Sungmin. So, Jung Jessica-shii, what brings you to this side of the town?" Sungmin's school wasn't exactly run down, nor was it extravagently elegant. It had more of a 'boarding school' look to it, rather than a high school.
"Oh, well, I had a little financial crisis here and there, and my parents decided it was best for me to move schools. Schools at Southern Seoul are a bit pricey neh?" Jessica joked.
"Yep... I guess?" Sungmin didn't really know, as he had never been to the Southern part. Always the Eastern. Always. "Have you got any friends?" Sungmin asked, curious. If she had not friends, he would've gladly offered to be hers, but... that might've shown a bit of desperation.
"Yep. In fact, eight of them are waiting in the canteen."
'Eight? She doesn't mean SNSD right? I mean, sure she's cute, and she's beautiful... oh what the hey! This girl belongs to be in that group!' Sungmin thought.
"Ahh, well I guess I'll see you 'round Jessica-shii." Sungmin siad, giving the pink folder to her.
"Yep, I guess so." She said, accepting the folder.
---
It had been three days since the incident. Sungmin was in his room. He lived in an apartment with one roomate. Cho Kyuhyun. The two seemed like real brothers, never separating, but... thats not what Sungmin thought. In fact, Kyuhyun was out, with one of the SNSD members Sungmin supposed. Kyuhyun had always been trying to take one of them out, but always got turned down. I guess Kyuhyun got lucky with one.
On the floor where Sungmin lived, there were six different homes. Each had two people residing in them, except for one, which had three. The whole floor was of great friends, who called themselves Super Junior. They were very close, but everyone roomed with who they were the closest to. They always went to school together, always shared laughs together, and always stuck together. Super Junior was the Kingkas at the school. Which is why when Sungmin had passed, many people had stared at him.
Being lonely wasn't something Sungmin could deal with. He decided to head out and take a walk around the park near his apartment. After fixing his hair, making sure he looked presentable, adding some cologne he walked out of the door, making sure to lock the door.
He walked out of the building, hands in his pockets, and whistling a tune. The birds seemed to know the tune, and tweeted along with him, making him grin. He walked across the road, making sure it was clear first, and arrived at the park. Since it was Saturday, the park was pretty busy. There were families having picnics, people jogging around, walking their dogs, taking their children out to play in the playground, lovers staring into each other's eyes, Kyuhyun holding Jessica's hand... Sungmin froze in his place. Kyuhyun was on a date with Jessica?! He couldn't believe it. For one thing, he felt like a tower had dropped onto him. Why should've he had felt like that? He barely knew the girl, why would he had liked her already? Maybe it was just a crush, something that wasn't meant to be...
He was about to turn around, when Kyuhyun had spotted him. Khyuhyun waved him over, and introduced the two to each other.
"Jessica, this is Sungmin hyung. He's the roomie I was talking about earlier." Kyuhyun explained.
"Yeah, I met him three days ago." Jessica whispered, trying to keep her gaze on Kyuhyun, obviously failing, since she kept glancing at Sungmin. 'Why does he look sad?' She wondered.
"Oh, well, since you've already met, then I guess there's nothing else to talk about. Hehehe... so, erm... hyung, I'll be home a bit late tonight. I've got somewhere to go with Jessica first." Kyuhyun said, wrapping an arm around her shoulders.
At the sight of that, Sungmin felt his chest tightening. "Arraso. Don't stay out to late, and Jessica, if he ever does something that makes your feel uncomfortable, just tell him. He would understand, won't cha Kyu?"
"Yep." Kyuhyun nodded, smiling at Sungmin.
Sungmin smirked then walked away.
'Huh, so much for the nice walk out. I met someone I liked, only to find my best friend already dating her. I can't risk my friendship just for one girl. I mean, Kyuhyun seems pretty serious about Jessica as well! Something about him that I had never seen in him before! I guess I should just let it go.' Sungmin thought, walking back to his apartment.
---
It had been three months. The Kyuhyun and Jessica thing had died over time. They didn't find anything in common. AT ALL. So, in the end, Jessica was still looking for her 'man' but... just wasn't looking at the right place. She was in her history class, when she felt something land on her shoulder. She turned and found a peice of paper on it. The person behind her pointed to the door. A figure's shadow moved quickly and left. She quickly grabbed it, before the teacher would notice, and read the note.
'If you'd like to listen to something I have to say,
then please meet me by the founting in the park after school, today.
I'm not sure if you'll come, but I'll still wait for you.
However, please do. PLEASE DO.'
---
Jessica was looking around. She had arrived at the park, as fast as she could. However, she was the only one there. Maybe she was a bit too early for the admirer to arrive? What if he thought she was too eager since she had shown up to early? Realizing this, Jessica flicked her forehead, wincing at the pain.
"Hey, don't do that." A soft voice said.
She opened her eyes. "... Sungmin-shii?" she whispered, making sure she wasn't hallucinating.
"Neh, so... what brings you to this park?" He casually asked.
"Oh, someone wrote me a note. It said to come here after school. I guess I was a bit too early for them. Or... or maybe I was too late and they left!!!" Jessica started to worry. What if she lost her potential 'the one' because of being late?!
"Erm.. I don't think you were too early, nor were you too late. In fact, you arrived at the same time as I." Sungmin stated, a glint shining in his eye.
"So... YOU sent me the note?" Jessica asked him. The corner of his mouth twitched up. Jessica gasped, them smiled. "It was a nice rhyme." she commented on the poem, taking out the paper.
"Hehehe... it was a bit cheesy though." He said, finally admitting it was him, and sat down next to her.
"Yeah... well then, you're MY cheesy boy." Jessica said, wrapping her arms around his.
He blushed his favorite color - pink.
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I hope you enjoyed! I'm sorry if its not to your liking though ^^.
I caught an... Angel
Author: [ Sung.ii.ee ]
Title: I caught an... Angel
Link:http://winglin.net/fanfic/ahngel/
Reviewer: purple_lilly
Site: Writers Strike - VST http://writer-strike-vst.blogspot.com/
Title: 5/5
It definitley sticks out from the rest of the other fanfics on winglin. Its captivates the reader, and makes them want to read it, curious to know what the story behind the title is.
Poster/Background: 9/10
The poster and background matched the theme of the story a lot. The poster features many things relating to the fanfic itself. EG: an angel, the main girl, a boy with a camera, the main boy. And, a Christmas bauble, showing that its related to Christmas. As for the background, you chose a good picture to use. It wasn't difficult for anyone to read, and certainly matched the theme.
Forewords: 7/10
A fantastic prologue as to how the boys got through the rounds. It also doesn't give too much away about the characters, which will bring the reader to wanting to know more about them. I for one found that slightly annoying, since I wanted to know more, but thats a good thing. It got you to get the readers wanting to know more.
Plot: 15/15
There are many plots out there with fantasy in it. I guess this sort of has fantasy as a gennre. The plots of Angels just recently became popular, however, the twists you created in the fanfic were unexpected. They flowed together well, it wasn't all over the place, confusing the reader. Instead, you made things clear and easy for the reader to be able to understand.
Creativity/Originality: 14/15
Once again, I say that the Angels recently became popular, so I had to reduce a point. But, the originality of your plot was simply great. Sure, Angels are common, but not spirits - I think. The characters that you added was a mix, and you even made a fictional character instead of putting 'you' or '____-ah'. Which, is easier on your behalf and the reader's.
Flow: 10/10
Everything flowed together perfectly. It wasn't going to fast, and all of the problems in the story had been resolved. So, nothing was left out.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10
[“Welcome home, dear.” Miss Son welcomed Dong Woon home.]
You didn't need the ',' after the 'welcome home'. You don't really pause after saying 'Welcome home'.
[Even put a small Santa cap on an orange you drew a happy face on, take a photo and there you go, the entry!]
Instead, it should've been: You could put a small Santa cap on an orange, draw a happy face on it, take a photo and there you go, an entry!
Other than some slight punctuation mistakes, I guess you did pretty well on it. As for the spelling, that TOO was alright. Your vocabulary was excellent =].
Characterization: 10/10
There wasn't just a certain 'band' of people. You mixed other groups and added a fictional character. Sometimes, writing with people from different groups are better than just writing about one. Reasons being, it broadens your knowledge to characters and different readers.
Writing Style: 10/10
Your writing style, I did enjoy. I liked how on some times there was comedy, but at other times, it was serious. The words you had used, were just the right ones to create the mood for the reader.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Overall I did enjoy it. I loved the characters personalities, the plot, the poster and background, and the characters! I do hope that I can read more from you. ^^.
Sub-Total: 93/100
Extras: 3/5
Your poster is awesome, so I'll add a point for that.
The characters in the fanfic were interesting.
I REALLY liked the plot and how it flowed.
Total: 96/105
Title: I caught an... Angel
Link:http://winglin.net/fanfic/ahngel/
Reviewer: purple_lilly
Site: Writers Strike - VST http://writer-strike-vst.blogspot.com/
Title: 5/5
It definitley sticks out from the rest of the other fanfics on winglin. Its captivates the reader, and makes them want to read it, curious to know what the story behind the title is.
Poster/Background: 9/10
The poster and background matched the theme of the story a lot. The poster features many things relating to the fanfic itself. EG: an angel, the main girl, a boy with a camera, the main boy. And, a Christmas bauble, showing that its related to Christmas. As for the background, you chose a good picture to use. It wasn't difficult for anyone to read, and certainly matched the theme.
Forewords: 7/10
A fantastic prologue as to how the boys got through the rounds. It also doesn't give too much away about the characters, which will bring the reader to wanting to know more about them. I for one found that slightly annoying, since I wanted to know more, but thats a good thing. It got you to get the readers wanting to know more.
Plot: 15/15
There are many plots out there with fantasy in it. I guess this sort of has fantasy as a gennre. The plots of Angels just recently became popular, however, the twists you created in the fanfic were unexpected. They flowed together well, it wasn't all over the place, confusing the reader. Instead, you made things clear and easy for the reader to be able to understand.
Creativity/Originality: 14/15
Once again, I say that the Angels recently became popular, so I had to reduce a point. But, the originality of your plot was simply great. Sure, Angels are common, but not spirits - I think. The characters that you added was a mix, and you even made a fictional character instead of putting 'you' or '____-ah'. Which, is easier on your behalf and the reader's.
Flow: 10/10
Everything flowed together perfectly. It wasn't going to fast, and all of the problems in the story had been resolved. So, nothing was left out.
Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: 8/10
[“Welcome home, dear.” Miss Son welcomed Dong Woon home.]
You didn't need the ',' after the 'welcome home'. You don't really pause after saying 'Welcome home'.
[Even put a small Santa cap on an orange you drew a happy face on, take a photo and there you go, the entry!]
Instead, it should've been: You could put a small Santa cap on an orange, draw a happy face on it, take a photo and there you go, an entry!
Other than some slight punctuation mistakes, I guess you did pretty well on it. As for the spelling, that TOO was alright. Your vocabulary was excellent =].
Characterization: 10/10
There wasn't just a certain 'band' of people. You mixed other groups and added a fictional character. Sometimes, writing with people from different groups are better than just writing about one. Reasons being, it broadens your knowledge to characters and different readers.
Writing Style: 10/10
Your writing style, I did enjoy. I liked how on some times there was comedy, but at other times, it was serious. The words you had used, were just the right ones to create the mood for the reader.
Overall Enjoyment: 5/5
Overall I did enjoy it. I loved the characters personalities, the plot, the poster and background, and the characters! I do hope that I can read more from you. ^^.
Sub-Total: 93/100
Extras: 3/5
Your poster is awesome, so I'll add a point for that.
The characters in the fanfic were interesting.
I REALLY liked the plot and how it flowed.
Total: 96/105
Wednesday, 25 August 2010
VST oneshot #3
Title: Fall for me...please?
Writer: purple_lilly
Characters: Ahn GiHye and Kim Junsu. Park Bom, Kim JaeJoong, TOP, and Lee Seungki.
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GiHye was looking up into the sky with her pouty thinking face on. Whatever she was thinking about, it was definitley important. It was: *Should I get strawberry ice-cream or chocolate fudge?* Okay... maybe it wasn't important. At all...
She was seated on a bench in the park. Soon she heard barking. She looked around for the dog, but there weren't any at all. She looked behind her though, and found a smirking Kim Junsu.
"Yah what are you doin? Trying to act like the animal you are?!"
"Hey! At least I'm not a pig like you!" He responded.
"Why you-" she started to chase him around the path. Junsu was screaming his head off, while also laughing with GiHye trying to catch him. And when she does, who knows what will happen to the poor dolphin boy...
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Three days later the both of them were headed to school. Along the way, they were joined by GiHye's other friends, JaeJoong and TOP. They weren't as close with Junsu as GiHye was, but they sometimes walked together. Not only that, but they also knew that GiHye could possibly kills Junsu within a second... So they had this positioning thing. TOP and JaeJoong were in the middle. And GiHye and Junsu at the ends. (order: GiHye, JaeJoong ,TOP and then Junsu). JaeJoong would put his arm around GiHye to prevent her strangling Junsu, and TOP would glare at Junsu so that he would stop aannoying GiHye. Oh yes, they were truly good friends...
The four were now in front of the school gates. TOP and JaeJoong smiled to the sky (sounds like a drama now...) While all GiHye and Junsu did was have a glaring competition. - without blinking. GiHye obviously won. She smiled and walked off, with JaeJoong's arm still around her. Now with that pair gone, TOP turned to Junsu.
He glared at him at first, then said, "have a nice day!" broke into a smile and walked off.
"Er.. yeah... you too..." Junsu murmured befire walking off to his locker.
~~~
It was now first lesson. Junsu and GiHye were seated next to each other. They always sat next together. Even though they'd kill each other at times, they were still the best of friends. The teachers knew how to keep them from ripping each other's head off. Something called, 'banned from the school toilets and every trip organized by the school.' Unfair? Yes, but that was the whole point of it! Which obviously worked, because inside school, Junsu and GiHye were a good team... the odd wedgie and glare at times, but they never got caught!
"Alright class. Today we shall talk about soundwaves, frequency and how sound is formed. Now, can anyone tell me what state gets sound to travel through the loudest?" Mr Yoon asked.
"Simple its air!" Junsu said, sticking his tongue out to GiHye's face.
GiHye put her hand up and said, "sir, isn't it any type of solid?"
"Why GiHye, you are absolutley correct!" Mr Yoon praised GiHye. She turned to Junsu and grinned at him.
"Now, tell me the difference about frequency and pitch." Mr Yoon asked.
"Ah-" Junsu started, but got interuppted.
"Trick question boy! They're the same."
"I was gonna say, the only difference is the name." Junsu answered.
"Oh... well, I am very sorry about that." Mr Yoon sarcastically mocked Junsu, who didn't understand what sarcasm meant. Because, he was smiling like a proud father, who saw his son kick a football for the first time. GiHye turned to her side, and shook her head. 'What did I do to deserve this kind of weird friendship?'
~~~
Three months now passed. The four were still good friends. They were close... however, GiHye was starting to becoming a bit a bit more distant. TOP and JaeJoong noticed, but they just kept quiet. The reason for Gihye's distance, was because she was falling for TOP! Hehehe... not really. ... Its Junsu. Yes. Gihye fell for her own best friend. Typical no?
The four of them were standing at GiHye's locker. They were waiting for her to get out her books and for school to start. Just then, a new student walked into the hallway. Everyone stopped what they were to doing to look at her. Park Bom, beautiful girl, wearing high heels, and a nice smile was one of them.
Bom looked at Junsu, and he melted, and became a gaze of love. GiHye snapped out of her faze first, and looked at Junsu. Her smile disappeared, and she turned to her locker. TOP and JaeJoong looked at each other, and shook their heads. They knew that their friend's liked each other, but they denied it.
(Class starts)
Junsu and GiHye weren't seated together in the class. The chairs were re-arranged, and they couldn't sit next to each other. There were seating arrangments. So... they were on their own, with their own tables. They weren't talking, nor was there any noise in the class. (They were the usual life of the class).
**Knock knock**
"Come in!" Shouted the teacher, who was taking the register.
Park Bom entered the room. People gasped, and the pencil in Junsu's mouth dropped to the ground. He looked at it rolling to Bom's feet. She bent down to pick it up, and placed it on his table, since he was at the very frone.
"Ahh... This is our new student, Park Bom."
"Annyong, my name is Park Bom. Please treat me kindly."
"Bom, sit next to Junsu, he's right in front of you.
They spent the whole lesson just doing random things.They never did anything in that lesson. Mainly muck about and stuff. But this time, GiHye thought her heart cracked and fell out. She didn't like this lesson anymore, it was supposed to be her favorite...
~~~
Park Bom has been attending the school for six months. She broke many people's hearts, because lots of people were asking her out. But, she just denied them, thinking that she was not 'ready'.
Every single day, GiHye mastered up all her courage to tell Junsu her real feelings. But that also gave him time to fall even deeper for Bom. GiHye called Junsu over for a 'talk'.
"Hey Jun-"
"GiHye!! ... I think I'm in love."
*With me?!* she thought. "Really?! With.. with who?"
"Park Bom." He announced, then sighed, and leaned on the wall.
"Oh... are you serious about this?" she asked.
"Yes. I think she's the one for me." He looked over to her. "So, what were you going to tell me?"
"Erm... I was gonna say...oh look! Here come JaeJoong. I've gotta go now. Sorry, bye!"
GiHye ran to JaeJoong and dragged him away. "Just walk okay?" She mumbled to him.
JaeJoong didn't do anything, he just put his arm around her shoulder and the both of them walked off.
Junsu blinked at them. He started to feel a little fire within him, but when Bom walked passed, the fire died away, but it was still there somewhere. Junsu chased after Bom and patted her shoulder.
"Erm.. Bom?"
She turned around, "yes Junsu?"
"I've liked .. you for quite a while now. Would you like to go on a date with me?"
"Erm... Okay." She smiled at him, and they both walked away, heading to the most fanciest restaurant.
~~~
GiHye was at her home. Yuri was over for a sleepover until Sunday. It was Friday, the end of the school week. The odd thing was, that GiHye wasn't talking or doing anything, like usual. Instead, she was looking out the window, while Yuri was prancing around... looking through her stuff etc...
"Hey, GiHye-ah!"
"Neh Yuri?" she responded.
"Whats the matter with you? You're not 'into' it like usual."
"Uhm.. I don't know if I should tell you this... but-"
"You like Junsu huh?" Yuri confirmed. GiHye only nodded. "But, he doesn't like you back?" GiHye nodded once again. Yuri sighed and went over to GiHye, she patted her back. "GiHye, theres plenty of other guys! He's just too stupid to realize that you were there for him."
"Yeah.. sure. Whatever." GiHye mumbled, and hugged her knees.
Yuri gasped. "Omo!! Those are so cute! You mind if I try it on?"
GiHye turned around to find her spazzing over a cute top. GiHye smiled, and nodded, trying to get into it like usual.
~~~
Yuri and GiHye had a fun weekend together, but she had to leave, which was what GiHye hated the most. Monday was worse. Junsu had left earlier than GiHye, so, that meant that they couldn't go to school together. She just went with JaeJoong and TOP. However, when they got to school, GiHye's heart burst. There was Junsu, hand in hand with Park Bom. *I guess their date went well then.* GiHye thought sadly. JaeJoong patted GiHye's shoulder in comfort,
"Its alright darling."
"What he said, minus the darling." TOP said smiling at her.
GiHye hugged both of them, and left for her locker's direction.
She wasn't looking where she was going, and bumped into a guy.
"omo! I'm so sorry. Let me get that for you." He bent down, and picked up her books.
When she looked up, she blushed. *He's so cute!* She thought.
"Erm, thanks." She smiled at him and walked away.
"Did you see that? Senior Lee Seungki talked to her! Lucky!" Said some girls passing by.
GiHye blushed. *He seems cute... really cute. I think... getting over Junsu won't be that hard after all.* Junsu walked by laughing with Bom. *On second thoughts, it might be a bit harder...* the pain in her grew bigger. She walked off with her head held downwards.
~~~
TOP cornered Junsu. His knees were buckling in fear. JaeJoong? He was glaring at him. And boy was that scary.
"Now, do you understand that you're hurting my best friend's feelings?" TOP growled.
"You don't have any best friend's that are girls..." Junsu chose his words slowly.
"Erm.. She's your best friend too!"
"JaeJoong? Aww.. hyung, I didn't know you liked me!" Junsu joked.
"Yah! We're talking about GiHye!" JaeJoong yelled.
Junsu flinched. "Err.. she's my best friend. How can she like me?!"
"Eugh!!!" TOP facepalmed himself.
"You guys must be joking! She's my BFF!" Junsu shouted. "Guys, I gotta go. Bom's here."
Junsu ran off, into Bom's hug and the both walked off.
"Aigoo... poor GiHye-ah." TOP mumbled, kicking a pebble on the ground.
"He CALLED ME A GIRL!!" JaeJoong shouted, kicking the wall over and over again.
~~~
GiHye was even more quiet, however everytime she would bump into usually bump into Lee Seungki she'd blush. Actually, he bumped into her so frequently, that he started to ask about her. Until, one day, he asked HER for a date. Who in their right mind that would deny would be an idiot.
So, after school, they got together and left for the same restaurant that Bom and Junsu were planning to be in also. GiHye and Seungki got there first. They ordered and sat in a booth. They were just talking about random things, when the bell signaling someone entered rang. GiHye turned around to find Junsu and Bom. He turned at the exact moment and smiled at her. But his smile slightly disappeared when he saw Seungki.
Bom and Junsu sat in a booth two rows in front of GiHye and Seungki. Junsu and GiHye were facing each other. Both had desires in their eyes to be with the other. But... Junsu was in love with Bom. There was no denying that. However, he also loved GiHye. *Wait, I love GiHye?!... I LOVE GIHYE!! I love her! I LOVE HER!!!* Junsu exclaimed in his mind. He hoped that he wasn't too late. When he saw the pair leave, he quickly made an excuse that he had to leave and left Bom.
She smiled. She knew what was going to happen. Her childhood friend GiHye was going to get the man of her dreams. Everyone knew that GiHye and Junsu were in love with each other. Its just the people themselves that didn't realize it. Bom paid for her order, and left, sipping a smoothie.
~~~
Junsu was following them, remaining quiet. They were now in front of her house. Junsu strained his ears to listen in on their conversation.
"I had a great time oppa." GiHye said.
"Me too. Lets do this again soon huh?" Seungki asked.
"I'm sorry, but I'm quite busy. But, if I have time, sure." She obviously lied. She still had high hopes about Junsu liking her back.
"Oh. Well okay then." Seungki turned to leave, but turned back, to give her a peck on the cheek. GiHye blushed, and said 'bye' to him. He left humming happily.
Sulking Junsu walked up to her.
"Yah."
"Hey." She said, unlocking the door.
Junsu walked behind her, and tapped her shoulder. She turned around, only to be kissed by him on the LIPS.
They broke away, and he witnessed a blushing GiHye.
"Err..-"
"You're mine arraso?"
GiHye only nodded, and they kissed again.
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Sorry for the delay!! ^^
Writer: purple_lilly
Characters: Ahn GiHye and Kim Junsu. Park Bom, Kim JaeJoong, TOP, and Lee Seungki.
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GiHye was looking up into the sky with her pouty thinking face on. Whatever she was thinking about, it was definitley important. It was: *Should I get strawberry ice-cream or chocolate fudge?* Okay... maybe it wasn't important. At all...
She was seated on a bench in the park. Soon she heard barking. She looked around for the dog, but there weren't any at all. She looked behind her though, and found a smirking Kim Junsu.
"Yah what are you doin? Trying to act like the animal you are?!"
"Hey! At least I'm not a pig like you!" He responded.
"Why you-" she started to chase him around the path. Junsu was screaming his head off, while also laughing with GiHye trying to catch him. And when she does, who knows what will happen to the poor dolphin boy...
~~~
Three days later the both of them were headed to school. Along the way, they were joined by GiHye's other friends, JaeJoong and TOP. They weren't as close with Junsu as GiHye was, but they sometimes walked together. Not only that, but they also knew that GiHye could possibly kills Junsu within a second... So they had this positioning thing. TOP and JaeJoong were in the middle. And GiHye and Junsu at the ends. (order: GiHye, JaeJoong ,TOP and then Junsu). JaeJoong would put his arm around GiHye to prevent her strangling Junsu, and TOP would glare at Junsu so that he would stop aannoying GiHye. Oh yes, they were truly good friends...
The four were now in front of the school gates. TOP and JaeJoong smiled to the sky (sounds like a drama now...) While all GiHye and Junsu did was have a glaring competition. - without blinking. GiHye obviously won. She smiled and walked off, with JaeJoong's arm still around her. Now with that pair gone, TOP turned to Junsu.
He glared at him at first, then said, "have a nice day!" broke into a smile and walked off.
"Er.. yeah... you too..." Junsu murmured befire walking off to his locker.
~~~
It was now first lesson. Junsu and GiHye were seated next to each other. They always sat next together. Even though they'd kill each other at times, they were still the best of friends. The teachers knew how to keep them from ripping each other's head off. Something called, 'banned from the school toilets and every trip organized by the school.' Unfair? Yes, but that was the whole point of it! Which obviously worked, because inside school, Junsu and GiHye were a good team... the odd wedgie and glare at times, but they never got caught!
"Alright class. Today we shall talk about soundwaves, frequency and how sound is formed. Now, can anyone tell me what state gets sound to travel through the loudest?" Mr Yoon asked.
"Simple its air!" Junsu said, sticking his tongue out to GiHye's face.
GiHye put her hand up and said, "sir, isn't it any type of solid?"
"Why GiHye, you are absolutley correct!" Mr Yoon praised GiHye. She turned to Junsu and grinned at him.
"Now, tell me the difference about frequency and pitch." Mr Yoon asked.
"Ah-" Junsu started, but got interuppted.
"Trick question boy! They're the same."
"I was gonna say, the only difference is the name." Junsu answered.
"Oh... well, I am very sorry about that." Mr Yoon sarcastically mocked Junsu, who didn't understand what sarcasm meant. Because, he was smiling like a proud father, who saw his son kick a football for the first time. GiHye turned to her side, and shook her head. 'What did I do to deserve this kind of weird friendship?'
~~~
Three months now passed. The four were still good friends. They were close... however, GiHye was starting to becoming a bit a bit more distant. TOP and JaeJoong noticed, but they just kept quiet. The reason for Gihye's distance, was because she was falling for TOP! Hehehe... not really. ... Its Junsu. Yes. Gihye fell for her own best friend. Typical no?
The four of them were standing at GiHye's locker. They were waiting for her to get out her books and for school to start. Just then, a new student walked into the hallway. Everyone stopped what they were to doing to look at her. Park Bom, beautiful girl, wearing high heels, and a nice smile was one of them.
Bom looked at Junsu, and he melted, and became a gaze of love. GiHye snapped out of her faze first, and looked at Junsu. Her smile disappeared, and she turned to her locker. TOP and JaeJoong looked at each other, and shook their heads. They knew that their friend's liked each other, but they denied it.
(Class starts)
Junsu and GiHye weren't seated together in the class. The chairs were re-arranged, and they couldn't sit next to each other. There were seating arrangments. So... they were on their own, with their own tables. They weren't talking, nor was there any noise in the class. (They were the usual life of the class).
**Knock knock**
"Come in!" Shouted the teacher, who was taking the register.
Park Bom entered the room. People gasped, and the pencil in Junsu's mouth dropped to the ground. He looked at it rolling to Bom's feet. She bent down to pick it up, and placed it on his table, since he was at the very frone.
"Ahh... This is our new student, Park Bom."
"Annyong, my name is Park Bom. Please treat me kindly."
"Bom, sit next to Junsu, he's right in front of you.
They spent the whole lesson just doing random things.They never did anything in that lesson. Mainly muck about and stuff. But this time, GiHye thought her heart cracked and fell out. She didn't like this lesson anymore, it was supposed to be her favorite...
~~~
Park Bom has been attending the school for six months. She broke many people's hearts, because lots of people were asking her out. But, she just denied them, thinking that she was not 'ready'.
Every single day, GiHye mastered up all her courage to tell Junsu her real feelings. But that also gave him time to fall even deeper for Bom. GiHye called Junsu over for a 'talk'.
"Hey Jun-"
"GiHye!! ... I think I'm in love."
*With me?!* she thought. "Really?! With.. with who?"
"Park Bom." He announced, then sighed, and leaned on the wall.
"Oh... are you serious about this?" she asked.
"Yes. I think she's the one for me." He looked over to her. "So, what were you going to tell me?"
"Erm... I was gonna say...oh look! Here come JaeJoong. I've gotta go now. Sorry, bye!"
GiHye ran to JaeJoong and dragged him away. "Just walk okay?" She mumbled to him.
JaeJoong didn't do anything, he just put his arm around her shoulder and the both of them walked off.
Junsu blinked at them. He started to feel a little fire within him, but when Bom walked passed, the fire died away, but it was still there somewhere. Junsu chased after Bom and patted her shoulder.
"Erm.. Bom?"
She turned around, "yes Junsu?"
"I've liked .. you for quite a while now. Would you like to go on a date with me?"
"Erm... Okay." She smiled at him, and they both walked away, heading to the most fanciest restaurant.
~~~
GiHye was at her home. Yuri was over for a sleepover until Sunday. It was Friday, the end of the school week. The odd thing was, that GiHye wasn't talking or doing anything, like usual. Instead, she was looking out the window, while Yuri was prancing around... looking through her stuff etc...
"Hey, GiHye-ah!"
"Neh Yuri?" she responded.
"Whats the matter with you? You're not 'into' it like usual."
"Uhm.. I don't know if I should tell you this... but-"
"You like Junsu huh?" Yuri confirmed. GiHye only nodded. "But, he doesn't like you back?" GiHye nodded once again. Yuri sighed and went over to GiHye, she patted her back. "GiHye, theres plenty of other guys! He's just too stupid to realize that you were there for him."
"Yeah.. sure. Whatever." GiHye mumbled, and hugged her knees.
Yuri gasped. "Omo!! Those are so cute! You mind if I try it on?"
GiHye turned around to find her spazzing over a cute top. GiHye smiled, and nodded, trying to get into it like usual.
~~~
Yuri and GiHye had a fun weekend together, but she had to leave, which was what GiHye hated the most. Monday was worse. Junsu had left earlier than GiHye, so, that meant that they couldn't go to school together. She just went with JaeJoong and TOP. However, when they got to school, GiHye's heart burst. There was Junsu, hand in hand with Park Bom. *I guess their date went well then.* GiHye thought sadly. JaeJoong patted GiHye's shoulder in comfort,
"Its alright darling."
"What he said, minus the darling." TOP said smiling at her.
GiHye hugged both of them, and left for her locker's direction.
She wasn't looking where she was going, and bumped into a guy.
"omo! I'm so sorry. Let me get that for you." He bent down, and picked up her books.
When she looked up, she blushed. *He's so cute!* She thought.
"Erm, thanks." She smiled at him and walked away.
"Did you see that? Senior Lee Seungki talked to her! Lucky!" Said some girls passing by.
GiHye blushed. *He seems cute... really cute. I think... getting over Junsu won't be that hard after all.* Junsu walked by laughing with Bom. *On second thoughts, it might be a bit harder...* the pain in her grew bigger. She walked off with her head held downwards.
~~~
TOP cornered Junsu. His knees were buckling in fear. JaeJoong? He was glaring at him. And boy was that scary.
"Now, do you understand that you're hurting my best friend's feelings?" TOP growled.
"You don't have any best friend's that are girls..." Junsu chose his words slowly.
"Erm.. She's your best friend too!"
"JaeJoong? Aww.. hyung, I didn't know you liked me!" Junsu joked.
"Yah! We're talking about GiHye!" JaeJoong yelled.
Junsu flinched. "Err.. she's my best friend. How can she like me?!"
"Eugh!!!" TOP facepalmed himself.
"You guys must be joking! She's my BFF!" Junsu shouted. "Guys, I gotta go. Bom's here."
Junsu ran off, into Bom's hug and the both walked off.
"Aigoo... poor GiHye-ah." TOP mumbled, kicking a pebble on the ground.
"He CALLED ME A GIRL!!" JaeJoong shouted, kicking the wall over and over again.
~~~
GiHye was even more quiet, however everytime she would bump into usually bump into Lee Seungki she'd blush. Actually, he bumped into her so frequently, that he started to ask about her. Until, one day, he asked HER for a date. Who in their right mind that would deny would be an idiot.
So, after school, they got together and left for the same restaurant that Bom and Junsu were planning to be in also. GiHye and Seungki got there first. They ordered and sat in a booth. They were just talking about random things, when the bell signaling someone entered rang. GiHye turned around to find Junsu and Bom. He turned at the exact moment and smiled at her. But his smile slightly disappeared when he saw Seungki.
Bom and Junsu sat in a booth two rows in front of GiHye and Seungki. Junsu and GiHye were facing each other. Both had desires in their eyes to be with the other. But... Junsu was in love with Bom. There was no denying that. However, he also loved GiHye. *Wait, I love GiHye?!... I LOVE GIHYE!! I love her! I LOVE HER!!!* Junsu exclaimed in his mind. He hoped that he wasn't too late. When he saw the pair leave, he quickly made an excuse that he had to leave and left Bom.
She smiled. She knew what was going to happen. Her childhood friend GiHye was going to get the man of her dreams. Everyone knew that GiHye and Junsu were in love with each other. Its just the people themselves that didn't realize it. Bom paid for her order, and left, sipping a smoothie.
~~~
Junsu was following them, remaining quiet. They were now in front of her house. Junsu strained his ears to listen in on their conversation.
"I had a great time oppa." GiHye said.
"Me too. Lets do this again soon huh?" Seungki asked.
"I'm sorry, but I'm quite busy. But, if I have time, sure." She obviously lied. She still had high hopes about Junsu liking her back.
"Oh. Well okay then." Seungki turned to leave, but turned back, to give her a peck on the cheek. GiHye blushed, and said 'bye' to him. He left humming happily.
Sulking Junsu walked up to her.
"Yah."
"Hey." She said, unlocking the door.
Junsu walked behind her, and tapped her shoulder. She turned around, only to be kissed by him on the LIPS.
They broke away, and he witnessed a blushing GiHye.
"Err..-"
"You're mine arraso?"
GiHye only nodded, and they kissed again.
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Sorry for the delay!! ^^
Tuesday, 6 July 2010
VST request #2
Sigh...what a bore. That old looking teacher is just droning...on...and...on... 'Can you seriously shut up?! I don't care how you became a friggin' maths teacher, and what degrees you got. I wanna LEARN!' is what I wanted to shout out, but not everyone is confident enough. And, those confident ones, are ALWAYS the LAZY ones. So, they'd rather listen to this 50-year-old looking teacher, rather than learn something more important. Like...geometry or algebra maybe?
“So, class...it seems that the lesson is about to end. Please can you stand up, seeing as you haven't taken out any equipment. So....” -BRINGG!- “Goodbye everyone, have a lovely weekend. Good afternoon class!” “Good afternooooooon sir.” The class replied. I wasn't bothered to reply to be honest. “You are dismissed.” Everyone then charged, ran, walked, hopped – hey, there's this girl who had crutches! - and jogged out of the room.
And so, Friday has finished. Home, here I come...more importantly, internet...HERE I COME!! First though, I have to wait for my ass of a brother, JaeJoong, he's my ride home you see... He must have been kept behind, since he's not waiting at our usual tree slash waiting place. But, then again, he could've left me...aigoo! That pabo! Ditching his own little sister like that. How did I even get INTO his family??
“Hey Eunhee~~ Did you wait long for your beloved oppa?” JaeJoong suddenly appeared behind me. “Aish, lets go! I have something to do at home!” I shouted, dragging him to the place where he had parked the car this morning. “Sheesh...just trying to be brotherly...fine! You'll never see that caring, brotherly side of mine at all anymore!” “GOOD! 'cos now, you don't sound pervy!” I shouted at him, making him red in the face. I quickly hugged him, “oppa sarang haeyo!” He groaned, and pried my hands off of him. I grinned skipping over to the red sports car...the car I CHOSE FOR HIM!...though he paid for it with his own money... (O_o) so, did I really choose it for him? Eh, what the hey...at least he's got a car!
“C'mon slowpoke! I have to really get home!” I shouted at my brother, who was around ten steps away from the dang car... He rolled his eyes and ran to the car, unlocking the door, getting us both in and starting the engine. “Happy?!” He asked. I nodded, grinning like a three-year-old who had just been congratulated for drawing a master piece. Though, when I WAS three, I DID do a master piece. I think it was, since it was a drawing of the family, and JaeJoong's head was...bigger than his whole body itself. Which is true, him having a big head. He's such a vain brother!
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As soon as we arrived back home, I ran up to my room after a 'Hi Mom' to my mom, and there I was three seconds (or more) in front of my computer. Our parents were nice enough to buy us our own computer(s), though it would be better with a laptop, because then, I can go on Facebook downstairs, while watching TV, instead I'm stuck with this big thing, heavier than me!
*Oh my gosh! Stop talking to yourself, and start going on the net!* Shouted my brain. I listened, and opened up my home page. It was yahoo. I read one of the headlines. 'Nickhun Horvejkul's new Twitter account!'
My mind wasn't working, and all I did was click on it, without thinking. On the new page, was information and blah blah blah – bore! So, instead, I just clicked on the link that would lead me directly to the page.
*OMO!* I thought, scrolling down his page. There are pictures of him and tweets from three minutes ago. *Could he still be online?* I wondered. All of a sudden I got a message. I opened it up and it read:
'I know u're looking @ my profile right now Kim Eunhee! Let's be friends?'
Okay...right then and there, if you walked in, you'd find me as a statue. Non-moving. Non-breathing. I think so anyways...well, if I wasn't breathing, I'd be dead. Automatically I tweeted him back.
'Is this Nickhun Horvejkul?' I mean, you never know. It could've been some perv, better to be safe than sorry!
Tweet! New message: 'Of course! That 1 & only. Waeyo? (Why?) What did u think?'
I replied, 'I thought u were a perv...' Omo~ I just said that to a famous IDOL, who might track me down and kill me for saying that. Yeah right!~ He's too nice...I hope he is though!
New Message: 'Hah! You're funny. Well, it was nice 'Tweeting' with you(?)'
I replied: 'Yep! Back @ u!'
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“Eunhee! Come down this minute!” Shouted my mom from downstairs. “Coming!” I shouted, turning off my computer, and went downstairs. What? I didn't want to waste the energy, like many people, A.K.A JaeJoong. Thats just the kind of person I am. Loving things created by God. And, if using too much energy destroys the planet, I'll do whatever I can to help.
Sitting in my usual seat, I dug into the ramen. My mom was too lazy to cook today, so she just put this in a pan. *Lazy~* I thought, sucking on the noodle. “Stop that,” whined JaeJoong “I can do whatever I want thank you~”I replied. I saw our parents look at each other then shake their heads. Is it my fault that my brother is really immature and takes this to that heart? No! They're the ones that taught him how to live life! So, don't blame me! Not my fault!
I scooped all the soup up, using my spoon and finished with an “Ahh~” at the end. JaeJoong looked over to me, with a glare. I glared back. *Bring it on baby!* I thought, as the contest began. “Guys, wanna wash the dishes?” Dad asked. “I'm out!” I shouted, running to my room. “Do I have to?” I heard JaeJoong as I walked up the stairs. *Hah! There you go~ Whiney dude!* I thought.
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(Three weeks later [Mon] – In the car, to school)
I was squealing inwardly. I just saw Nickhun's status, and it said that he's in the area near my place. Yeah -cough-, I'm kinda following him now...what? He let me. He's following me back anyways! Which, I find so totally kind, and...blushable? Is 'blushable' even a word?
“Yah~ can you please shut up? I'm trying to listen to the radio's reports.” JaeJoong said. *Was I squealing out loud?* I wondered. *Whatever, he wouldn't understand. He's not a girl...unless...* Unconsciously, my eyes diverted to his chest. *Nope...he's definitely male.* I thought, while looking out the window.
Suddenly, I turned around. “Was that Nickhun?” I mumbled under my breath. I could've sworn he was. Plus, the guy smiled at me for crying out loud! How'd he know it was me? Unless he looked at my photos? I covered my face. *Omo! I have some photos there I'd never think a famous guy like him shouldn ever see!* I was rocking back and fourth, trying to calm down my jagged breathing. OMO!...
'...wait! How can you be so sure Eunhee? I mean, he might just be friendly, or just a stranger smiling to people passing by in the cars, or walking!' Said my ^Brain's^ voice. Yes, I have a ^Brain's^ voice. Kinda like a conscience, but...more... hmm, retarded? - In a way...
“Yeah~ Maybe its just some random guy waving to people.” I said quietly, to myself. Yet, again, Jae heard me and said, “yah! Crazy person, shut up!” I instantly quietened. There's no use arguing with him. He'd win either way...
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^Bang^ Went my locker. I just closed it, after taking out the contents/books I needed for the following lesson. My locker always bangs whenever I close it. No matter how gently I do so, its always, BANG!, so...I don't bother. There's no point in complaining anyways. I don't want to be treated specially because of a simple locker problem. Other students have bigger problems than me. Go to them instead!
I walked over to my lesson: Physics. Right now, we were doing a re-cap. So that the teacher would see what we knew, and what we needed to develop in understanding. For example, I can't work out the distance, if the time is 00:23 and speed being 32p/s (per second). Ma'am Trevor is an American teacher, that speaks fluent Korean. Occasionally, whenever we behave, she teaches us some English words/phrases. We learn less than what she teaches us in our REAL English class! Unbelievable!~
“Ma'am, I don't understand this!” I said, putting up my hand. Ma'am Trevor walked over to me, with a gentle smile. She's really friendly. My mom said, if you like your teacher, there's a possibility of you liking that subject more. Which is true. She's nice, and I like the subject. Simple as. “Okay, so you draw ----”
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We were at our lunch break right now. I had some friends, but all they talked about was, 'did you hear about SHINee having two members who have a new hairstyle for their comeback?' and, 'do you think I'll be able to be like Lee Hyori one day?' Psh! As if! Keep on dreaming girl, wait! That was a boy (O_o)... But from those examples, you can see what they only talk about. It does my head in. Although, I tend to join in sometimes, but I can't be asked to right now, I seriously can't at all.
So, instead, I sat with my brother and his friends. Oppa and company didn't mind me. They just continued their business as usual. The fan-girls never attacked me. JaeJoong's my brother. Many of the girls become my friend so as to get close to him. Which makes me not give my FULL trust to people. If I did, I'd come home crying everyday. Since the only reason a girl would want to be my friend, they'd just want to be with my brother and the rest. Which, for me, is unacceptable. Totally!
I looked at the boys around me. They were all laughing. And for some reason, their laughter rubbed off onto me. I ended up silently chuckling, while sipping my water. Almost choking! Thankfully, JaeJoong patted my back. I smiled at him, *okay...maybe he's not such a mean brother...* he took my muffin, held it up to me, and took a bite, winking at me. I glared at him, *I take that back...* I thought, scowling.
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It was now after school. Boy oh boy, time goes by so fast! I can't believe how fast. I remember getting bored out of my wits by Mr Song, now, I'm in my brother's car getting driven home.
However, there's a plus side to it! Having Nickhun show his status, I managed to find out where he was. So, I forced my brother to let me out of the car, while we were still passing the Central Park. It wasn't busy yet, since rush hour hasn't started. I say 'forced' because, if I'm not home safe, he'll get the scolding. I don't really care to be honest. As long as I can meet Nickhun, I'm FINE! A-OK!
“Arraso. But call me okay? I don't want my baby sister to be kidnapped or anything kay?” JaeJoong asked me. “Neh! I'll be home ASAP. Tell mom and dad that I'm with a friend.” I answered, walking to the very core of the park. “And, shouldn't you be driving? Its dangerous to talk and drive.” I noted. “I park pabo-yah!” JaeJoong yelled into the phone and hung up. I laughed at my phone and proceeded with my journey. Wherever you are Nickhun, I shall find you!~ Gah! I sound like some obsessed stalker. I need to stop this instant!
In the distance, I saw someone wearing a 'NY' cap, and constantly looking around. I raised my eyebrows and approached him. He turned around once I nudged him. “Oh, hello.” He simply said, then continued to look around. “Nickhun, I'm Eunhee.” I said, grabbing his attention. “Oh, mianhe. You just didn't look like and Eunhee...more like a Haneul.” He smirked and took out his hand, “I'd like to formally introduce myself. I am Nickhun Horvejkul. Nice to meet you. And you are?” I spazzed inwardly, while shaking his hand, “Kim Eunhee at your service!” I saluted using my free hand. “Well, miss Kim Eunhee, lets get to know each other with ice-cream?” He asked, grinning. I nodded. Hey, it may just be ice-cream, but...I'm having it with Nickhun. THE Nickhun!~
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Its been two months. I'm always meeting Nickhun whenever he has free time. Which I understand. Him being a famous idol and all. Usually, there's no fans following. But, lately there's some, so even I have to wear a disguise. Since Nickhun didn't want me dead. Sweet of him no?
Now that we've been meeting each other, I've started to develop something. Something that made me wonder. Am I just his fan? Or, do I like him more than a fan? Every time I see him, my heart skips a beat, or even quickens. My palms get all sweaty. I used to stutter, but now I'm used to talking to him. Could this feeling be love?
Then, one day...I got my answer. I was checking any new updated on Twitter, and I saw Nickhun's status. It was: 'Currently loving E.K'. Just with that one sentence, I found out myself that I had loved him. It was just my fan obsession that covered it.
I texted him, 'Meet me at the park we usually meet at, in five to ten minutes?'
He texted back, 'okay. See you in a few!'
I took a deep breath. I was going to confess to him. Whether it would be romantic or not, I'm still going to...
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I was sitting on the bench, waiting for Nickhun's arrival. He came three minutes late, but I don't blame him. Maybe he was in traffic or something. He walked over to me, with reddening ears and a huge smile.
“So, what do you wanna do?” He asked. I looked at him, and knew, that it was time to tell him. “Nickhun, 143...” I looked down. Nickhun however didn't respond. Nervous of being rejected, I looked up, to find Nickhun's face close to mine. “1433 (I love you too).” I smiled, and then he did something unexpected...he kissed me!
Well, I think I'm going to change my 'single' status to 'in a relationship' on Facebook. Just after my date with Nickhun...
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Mi Ja sighed. She was sitting on her desk, longingly staring out into the distance. Thats what other people thought. When really, she was looking over to her boyfriend, Changmin. He caught her eye and winked. Causing here to giggle.
“Miss Choi?!” Her teacher yelled. “Neh prof?” she answered looking like she didn't want to be in class. “Could you please tell me why you're not paying attention to my class?” he asked. Mi Ja shrugged. “I dunno prof. Maybe cos you're too boring?” *Oh no! Not again. She's going overboard now!* her friend JaeRi thought. Last time she was back talking to a teacher, she had to have detention for a whole week. Two hours after school. *What I don't understand is why Mi Ja is acting.* JaeRi wondered. While JaeRi had been 'so into her thoughts' Mi Ja had been sent out of the room.
As soon as she had exited, she ran down the hallway, out the gym's doors and to the field. It was massive and you can't really notice if someone was out there or not. Because they'd look like a little ant, however she went deeper, and farther away from the school. To a place only known to her, her boyfriend – Changmin – and the caretaker. Mi Ja lay down on the soft, newly cut grass. She didn't care about the worms and whatnot. A chuckle was heard from above her head. Well, from her position, it felt as if he or she was above her head. Sitting up, she turned around and grinned.
“Oppa!” She wrapped her arms around his neck and gave him a kiss on the cheek. All the while, he was smiling, happily and wrapped his arms around her waist. She leaned back a bit and warmly smiled up at him. “What?” He asked. A fly then flied past him, and landed on his shoulder, causing Mi Ja to scream and let go of Changmin. “Get that off you now!” she squealed as the fly went off him, onto her. “HELP!” she screamed. Changmin chuckled and took it off her shoulder and let it free. He smiled at Mi Ja, who was calming herself down from the panic.
His seriousness turned on though, “Mi Ja, how come you're always getting into trouble huh?” he asked, concerned. “Oppa, I don't really care to be honest. They're all used to it. No point changing that.” Changmin shook his head, “Mi Ja, its important. If you wanna get a good job, you have to work hard in school.” Mi Ja just stubbornly shook her head. “No thanks...I've got to go to room 711. Thats where detention is held today. I'll see ya round.” Mi Ja made a move to leave, but just as she was about to, Changmin grabbed her arm, and gave her a deep, passionate kiss. Satisfied, he smiled at her, “now you can go.” Mi Ja nodded then walked back to the school's direction, looking a 'bit' drunk. Changmin just chuckled, and headed for school using the opposite direction.
“Mi Ja? Again?! WHY DO YOU ALWAYS END UP HERE?” asked the teacher that supervised the detention students. Truthfully, he was nice. But the principle was outside and...basically he was acting. When the principle eventually left, Mr Hwang sighed and said, “Mi Ja, why do you always end up here?” again, but softer. “Because sir, I...I dunno. I guess its just the way I am.” Mi Ja shrugged. Mr Hwang pinched the bridge of his nose, took off his glasses then put it back on. “What are we to do with you?” he asked, himself. Mi Ja overheard, shrugged and walked over to her USUAL table, it even had her name graffiti'd on it.
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The bell for lunch rang. All the detention students had left earlier, but Mi Ja was a 'special' student that had to stay during the four lessons, until lunch. But, what the teachers don't know, is that by doing that, she is having free time instead of learning.
“Annyong-gaseyo Sir Hwang!” Mi Ja bowed and left the room, slinging her shoulder strap onto her shoulder and headed to the cafeteria. There, she spotted her friend, JaeRi on their usual seat. Next thing she knew, she had stumbled. One of Changmin's friends stuck out his foot, causing her to trip over. JaeJoong high fived Junsu and they laughed. Mi Ja just glared at Changmin for not standing up for her. She left with a huff, glared some more at 'DBSK' and walked over to JaeRi.
“Mi Ja-ah, they're going overboard now. I mean, shouldn't Changmin-shii be able to defend his own, -” her voice quietened, “girlfriend?” she asked. Mi Ja just shook her head, “ignore me and enjoy your lunch. Lets just ignore it, and hope it won't happen again...”
...too bad it DID...
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Mi Ja was on her way home one day, when some girls started to corner her.
“Why do you hate DBSK?” “Are you crazy or something?” another girl asked. “Hmm...something tells me that she's just looking for attention, and why not stand out by being the only girl to despise them?” One thought, thinking that was what Mi Ja's purpose was. All the while, Changmin had walked passed, head down looking as if he was laughing. Well to Mi Ja, it looked like laughing, when really...it was crying. *I'm sorry I can't defend you. You're the one that said yourself...you can take care of yourself...* he thought, getting into his car.
Mi Ja had smirked at the girls and shoved all of them down. “Why don't you guys just freaking leave me alone? Aren't you happy that I don't like him? It means one less girl you're having to fight against for one of the DBSK member's love. OKAY?!” she screamed at them. The three girls stared at her, horrified and scared. They scuttled away, and whispered among themselves while doing so.
Mi Ja looked up into the sky. *WHY DOES CHANGMIN OPPA IGNORE ME?????? WHAT HAVE I DONE TO HIM? HE'S THE ONE THAT ASKED ME OUT. Yet...I'm the one that wants it a secret. Was I stupid to have done so?* she thought, really annoyed. She screamed and kneeled down onto the floor. It started to rain. “Just my luck...” she said as the rain soaked her school cardigan. She sniffled and attempted to stand up. Luckily she had managed to eventually and was walking to her home's direction.
When she had arrived, her mom was scolding her for making the floor wet. But when Mi Ja started to cough, her mom started to worry about her. “Mi Ja, go to your room. I'll bring some soup. Change first kay?” her caring voice soothed Mi Ja's pain. She nodded and went up the stairs, dragging her feet. Her parents and JaeRi knew about Mi Ja and Changmin's relationship. That was how much she trusted them, but Changmin...he didn't tell a soul.
Mi Ja slumped her shoulders and leaned against the headboard of her bed. Sighing, she grabbed the remote on her bedside table and switched her TV on. A boring kid's show was on, but she was too lazy to change it. Her mom knocked on the door. “Mi Ja? Soup is ready.” her mom then popped in and put the tray on her lap. “Kamshamnida.” Mi Ja said, then went into a coughing fit. “Oh my...” her mom whispered. She left the room, but came back with a glass of water and placed it on her bedside table. Mi Ja thanked her again as she left the room.
Five minutes later, the food wasn't touched. Stomach grumbling, Mi Ja eventually gave up and ate her soup. *Yum.* she thought, with NO enthusiasm yet she still enjoyed it and finished it. Sighing, she put the tray on the floor and took a sip of her water then placed it back to where it came from. She turned off the TV and leaned onto her side. *Goodnight...* she thought, and went to sleep.
When she was deep asleep, her mom came in and took the tray from the floor. She gave Mi Ja a kiss on the forehead and left, after turning off the lights. 'Night dear.' she mouthed then exited.
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The following day, Mi Ja attended school. She was feeling better, thanks to her mom's soup. Humming, she entered the code for her locker. It finally opened to reveal a rose, with a tag attached to it, with a string. She quietly read it to herself:
To my love,
I am very sorry for the things I've done in the past. I've gotten revenge on Jae hyung...just wait until lunch ;). Please forgive me. If you do, come to our special place. If you don't come three minutes before the bell, then I'll understand you haven't forgiven me...
Changmin.
She sighed, *how CORNY!...but still, its cute.* she hugged the rose to herself, but accidentally pricked her finger. “Aigoo.” she sighed and sucked on it. She checked her watch. There was plenty of time before the bell was to ring. So, instead of running there like a mad woman, she wanted to tease the boy a little bit, by not coming until FIVE minutes before the bell. *Good plan!* she thought then skipped to the library.
....meanwhile...
Changmin was waiting at the secluded area of the school with a bouquet of flowers. Every second, he checked his phone for the time. Twenty minutes. Fifteen...fourteen...ten...eight...six....still no sign of his love. *But I put three minutes...she might come EXACTLY at that time...so I'll wait.*
In the library, there was no sign of Mi Ja, in fact she was running around the campus to the 'area' where they were supposed to meet. *Four minutes left before school starts!* her head screamed. She cursed herself mentally and urged herself to keep running.
As if on cue, exactly three minutes before the ring of the bell, Mi Ja turned up, puffy-faced and out of breath. Changmin stood there smiling at her, happy to know that she actually came.
“So...you forgive me?” he asked. Mi Ja nodded. She stuck her hand out, and did a 'v' sign, “two minutes...lemme...catch my breath...” “But then the bell rings.” Changmin mentioned. Almost immediately, Mi Ja ran over and gave him a hug. *I could live with this...* he thought, cuddling her back while closing his eyes.
The bell rang, breaking them from their trance. Changmin gave her a sweet, passionate but short kiss, and leaned back to see her eyes still closed. “Ja-ah? Kaja, we have school remember?” he asked. She pouted but nodded. “Arraso...”
They headed back to school, but when they were three feet away from the school grounds itself, they let go of each other's grasps. Sighing, Mi Ja walked over to her homeroom, which was also the room of her first lesson. Changmin ducked his head and headed for his direction. The two lovers separated their ways...
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It was lunchtime. Mi Ja and JaeRi were seated in their usual seats. Mi Ja witnessed as DBSK entered the room, thinking they were 'all that' maybe they were, but they didn't have to boast. Out of all the five, Changmin seemed to be the only one who didn't seem to boast about a lot. Changmin caught her eyes for a second, then smiled and looked away – still smiling. Mi Ja grinned and stuffed one rice cake into her mouth.
Minutes later she (and everyone in the whole canteen) heard a shriek. Mi Ja looked up to see JaeJoong standing up and shaking in fear. For there atop his food was nothing other than a cockroach. *Aww...serves you right for tripping me over!* she thought, grinning and laughing. Changmin saw her and smiled. Pleased that she found it amusing...he too did. So did the other guys...and everyone else in the canteen.
When everything settled down, JaeJoong asked his fellow comrades, “who did this?”. Changmin, being brave, said, “I did.” all the others looked at him shocked. He had never done something like that before. If only they knew why, but then again, if they did, they didn't have to treat his girlfriend like trash. *I wanna tell them, but how do I?* he wondered. “YAH! Changmin-ah why so cruel to your hyung?” JaeJoong whined. Changmin shook his head, sighed and said, “mian...I was bored kay? It was boring in gym, so I excused myself and went into the changing rooms. Then, I saw your bag...and mysteriously, a rubber cockroach was in my bag, so I thought 'why not put that in?'...so I did...and I'M VERY SORRY!” Changmin quickly apologized before his hyung could do anything else to him. Surprisingly JaeJoong wasn't doing anything to him. Sighing in relief, Changmin sat down and dug into his food.
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Mi Ja had witnessed the whole thing and while in her English class was laughing to herself. The teacher was glaring at her, and surprisingly she shut up. Usually she would roll her eyes, but this time she was smiling innocently to Miss Kim. Everyone was shocked of her actions and stared at her for at least a minute. Mi Ja smiled to herself, happy that she had managed to not laugh out loud and annoy the teacher even more.
She started to pay attention and the whole lesson went by, without her being told off by the teacher. Not a SINGLE time. Which was a shocker, since this girl here is a real trouble maker. Everyone in the whole class was surprised to see her raising her hands instead of shouting the answers out, disrupting some of the other student's learning. JaeRi smiled, happy her best friend was finally changing.
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It was after school. The usual girls that usually bullied her, just ignored her. Didn't pay attention and went over to DBSK and spazzed and flirted with the boys who showed off. All Changmin did was yawn, look her way and winked. Walking away with a giggle, the oblvious girl and boy didn't notice that one of the girls was watching them closely, and didn't like the result at all.
The girl – KyoRei – walked over to Changmin and wrapped her arms around his shoulders. Changmin tensed up as she whispered something in his ear. He glanced at Mi Ja with panicy eyes which told her 'I swear, I have no clue why she's hugging me'. Luckily, she shrugged at him and walked away to her home. KyoRei then whispered again, “Changminnie oppa, I know your little secret. Who knew you had a girlfriend?” She asked. Changmin's eyes widened. “Why are you doing this?” He asked, completely enraged.
He knew what the girl was going to do now...Blackmail him. But, he didn't want his precious girlfriend to get hurt so he just turned to her with a menacing glare. He composed himself and said, “guys, I'll get going. KyoRei, can you come with me?” He asked, smiling, with gritted teeth that if pressed against each other any harder, all his teeth would crack. KyoRei nodded and followed him to the car. *This is suspicous...* Yunho thought, he knew about the secret relationship, since he'd seen them kissing, but kept it to himself. “Woo! Atta boy!” JaeJoong smirked and put an arm around one to KyoRei's friends, who blushed and stuttered.
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It was Friday already. The week passed by so fast, and Mi Ja was changing her attitude and was actually MISSED in the detention room. Everyone loved having her there with them. She helped 'lighten up' the boring and monotone mood.
Everyone noticed her new mood, and didn't question it. She still had a very large temper and you can't control her. You'd have to lock her in a room until she calms down. When you step in, you see tables wrecked and some glass smashed. There was nothing, except Changmin – but they didn't know that! - that people could do to stop her.
The teacher was teaching away and turned her back for the very first time since the lesson began, then she heard some giggling. *Oh no! Mi Ja is back to her old ways...* However, the giggling turned out to cause the whole class to uproar. Miss Kang turned around and glared at her students. “Why are you all laughing?” she asked. “'cos you've got tissue on your skirt!...hahahahahahhahahaha!!” Said the girl up front. Miss Kang immediately blushed and turned her head, indeed seeing the tissue paper. She tugged it out and resumed her teaching. All Mi Ja did was shake her head. *Immature imbeciles!* she shouted at them in her mind.
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The day passed by quickly. Whenever Changmin and Mi Ja passed each other, their hands 'accidentally' touched. KyoRei raised her eyebrows at this. She knew that it certainly WASN'T an accident. And intended to prove it.
So, at lunch time, she went over to Changmin and whispered to his ear. To Mi Ja, it looked like something that made her very jealous. However, actually it was, “Yah! If you want the girl you love, follow me.” Changmin's face became pale, and he followed her. Mi Ja, curious of what was happening, followed them.
They were headed for the secret place, Changmin thought was HIS secret place. But not anymore since the KyoRei knew the way, in fact...she was leading the way! Having no other choice, Changmin had to follow. Meanwhile, KyoRei saw a shadow following them. *Perfect!* she smirked, she saw those shoes earlier worn by Mi Ja. She was obviously following them.
KyoRei then stopped stood exactly at the spot where Mi Ja and Changmin had their first kiss together. But she didn't know that! KyoRei seeing Mi Ja in the distance, quickly thought of a plan. She whispered in Changmin's ear. “Give me a kiss, and I won't say a word.” She said, smiling 'innocently'. Changmin's knees wobbled a bit. He wanted to shake his head, but sighed. He gave her a questioning look, and she nodded. Expectant. He leaned in slowly, but KyoRei was too impatient and leaned in herself, closing the distance between them and gave him a smooch.
Mi Ja however, saw the whole thing. She leaned onto the tree beside her, tears streaming down her face. The oblivious pair – for Changmin anyway – broke away and the first thing that happened, was Mi Ja ran away. She...she just ran! Changmin saw her before she left. He glared at KyoRei. “YOU SET ME UP!” he shouted at her. She shrugged, flipped her hair with her newly painted nails and walked away. *Omo! Ottoke?...Molla!!! (Oh no! What do I do?....I don't now!!!)* Changmin shouted. *Pabo-yah!* he screamed out loud, “I'm such a pabo, idiot, baka!!!!” He remembered Mi Ja and ran, trying to think of where she may be...
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Changmin was now in class, the one they had together. She wasn't there. When he secretly asked JaeRi, she said that Mi Ja went home saying that she had hay fever. There was also tears in her eyes. Changmin mentally hit himself, *I'm such a dickhead! Why did I freaking kiss that slut? Stupid!*
The day ended faster than Changmin wanted. He needed to explain before Mi Ja would break up with him for real...
...Too bad she did. By text. Went he got home, he had a text from Mi Ja, 'Mian, I don't think its working out. Lets break up. Bye!' Tears in his eyes, Changmin went into his room, there he cried for the whole day.
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Three months passed. Three months of pain. Three month of hurt. Three months of silence. Three months of annoyance. Three months of- Okay. To be honest, its a long list. Basically, three months of sadness.
Mi Ja ignored EVERY call. EVERY text. EVERYthing related to anything with Changmin, whether it be his favourite food, or someone with his hairstyle. She didn't want to do with anything that reminded her of Changmin. It caused her too much pain.
Nowadays, she's not as talkative. Not as interactive. Just a cold quiet girl, who people avoided no matter what. The problem was, they didn't know what happened to her, and were too scared to ask questions.
Changmin though, was sitting in his usual seat in the canteen. Glaring at KyoRei who smiled meekly at him. Disgusted, he turned his face and met eyes with Mi Ja. She saw, her eyes widened, while his eyes were pleading and said 'Take me back!'. Mi Ja rolled her eyes and walked away, into the distance. Changmin sighed and leaned back onto his chair. KyoRei smiled seeing this and ate her salad.
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It was Changmin and Mi Ja's 29th Monthiversary, but there wasn't one since they broke up. Sadly, Changmin walked into school. There he saw Mi Ja at her locker, taking things out. Changmin got an idea. He grabbed Mi Ja's wrist and started to drag her somewhere. “Yah! Shim Changmin, where the hell are you taking me?!” She asked, clearly pissed off. “I've been meaning to do something, but I never got a chance.
They entered the canteen, where most of the students were. Changmin coughed loudly, and addressed the whole student body. “Hello. I'm here today to tell you something very important. You see, Mi Ja and I are dating. -” Lots of gasps were heard. JaeJoong spat out his drink. Mi Ja's eyes widened and she tugged on his arm. He still continued. “You see, we recently broke up because of some problems, but I just want to day, in front of all these people,-” he turned to Mi Ja, “I still love you and always will. It wasn't my fault. I'm sorry that I made you keep this relationship a secret. Forgive me, and take me back?” He asked. The girls squealed, getting giddy. Mi Ja stared into his eyes for a good minute. “I dunno...” Changmin began to panic. “Of course pabo!” She smirked and gave him a hug.
Changmin sighed in releif. “Saranghae Mi Ja.” “Nado Saranghae oppa.” She answered back, then they looked at each other, giving each other a kiss. Causing DBSK – except Yunho – to be taken aback. JaeJoong even choked again!
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